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    My Secret Angel

    Here's some more of my lyrics Hope you enjoy


    Title-My Secret Angel


    What are these feelings that are stiring inside of me?
    What is this strange feeling inside of me?
    You speak to me,voice so silky
    I begin to have a meltdown!

    You look,now your starin at me...
    What do you see in me?
    Tell me please! What do you see in me?!
    I see nothing good about me,so why do you stay with me!?

    Why do you whisper sweet nothings to me?
    What do you see in me!?!
    I don't understand you,I don't ever think I will...
    My Sweet Angel of Temptation...

    I long for you,I need you,Now I lust after you
    My Sweet Angel,why do you stay with me?
    There's nothing good about me
    I'm nothing,just a shadow that no one sees...

    You hold me tight,every night
    You whisper that you'll always be near me
    You whisper that you'll always protect me
    You whisper that you'll never harm me in anyway
    You whisper to me softly,that you'll always Love me...

    My Sweet Angel.My Dearest Angel.Please ....hold me tonight!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: My Secret Angel

    Woo I love it ^_^ Nice poem, or song ^^;
    You hold me tight,every night
    You whisper that you'll always be near me
    You whisper that you'll always protect me
    You whisper that you'll never harm me in anyway
    You whisper to me softly,that you'll always Love me...
    That looks like a person that you are in love with, nice choice of words

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    Re: My Secret Angel

    Thanks Ravey And it's a song...or lyircs lol And it;s kinda about someone i'm in love with.....not really sure lol But thanks anyway for commenting on it
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: My Secret Angel

    Sweet! Go for it girl! You've got talent.

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    Thanks Vincent That makes me very happy
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: My Secret Angel

    My Sweet Angel of Temptation...
    I long for you,I need you,Now I lust after you
    My Sweet Angel,why do you stay with me?
    Your best work so far Shini. ^_^ Sweet angel of temptation... haha, now I'm gonna use this in my everyday vocabulary. lol.

    Very descriptive, nice atmosphere. I think this is something the majority of ppl can relate to. Myself included. I hope to read more of this in future.

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    Re: My Secret Angel

    Thanks Reese I'm always trying my best Lol,go ahead lol
    You think so,well that's good 2 know And I hope so as well lol
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