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    My Secret Hero

    I'm sorry I couldn't save you.

    I was only a child, scared of reality and pain.

    You were right there. Yearning and yelling for help.

    And I hid.

    I fled for my life, while you...you were strong and willfull.

    I look up to you. My secret hero..

    Seeing your body fall to the ground. Your eyes watching me from beneath the car.

    May you rest in peace, sir. For you gave me courage I never had.

    *Yes, this is based on personal experience. This poem is dedicated to a man..a stranger whom I saw get shot and killed right before my eyes.

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    Re: My Secret Hero

    O.o this really happend,it must have bin hard to see that, but its a nice tribute to him
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    Thank you koga. Yes, it was a very traumatic experience for me. I cry when I think about it. How he died in front of me. How her piercing eyes looked at me and my family before going back into the house. I just thought writing this poem would help lighten the situation, and give that man the respect he deserves.

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    Re: My Secret Hero

    well sorta know how u feel seeing some one die as u kno

    on a lighter note its a very nice tribute to him
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    Thanks koga :] It came from my heart. And I'm sorry about what happened. Must have been horrible. I'm glad you made it out okay, and that everything worked out.

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    Re: My Secret Hero

    very cool tribute bloue it was awesome and i know
    the feeling of loosing somone like that it hurts like hell
    and the pain never really goes away it will always be there
    but something like this makes it easier to go on woth your life
    thoug.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Yeah, I agree chris. Something about losing someone very dear to you makes it easier to go with your life. If not easier, then it gives you courage and experience. You were able to witness something of such loss and go through with it. And thanks for the comment on the poem

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    Re: My Secret Hero

    A tribute to somebody you admired?Man,i haven't read something like this in a while.I respect the fact that you decide to honour this person.I guess though,with more imagery,would have made this poem better.Forgive my criticism,though your poem is quite good.

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