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    No, no! Criticism is good! Thank you! I know the poem should have much more detail, but it was something I thought should be quick and to the point. Although imagery and such would be good. Thank you JefferyXie! And this poem wasn't to someone whom I admired. I didn't even know the person. I just saw them get shot a lot, and then drop dead... He just gave me courage and inspiration at the point. I didn't think of it then..but I did now [that I'm older and time has passed]. Thank you once again for the comment.

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    Its really good and I dont think i could be like u and write about it Id be in the nut house well it was reallreally good loved it
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    Wow, thank you fredsboo! I'm glad you enjoyed it so. Yeah, it took quite some time to get over that. A couple of years actually. Of therapy and whatnot. But I'm fine with it now. Writing and talking about it and everything. But thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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    I loved it Wolf-chan it made me cry. I don't know what I would have done if I was in your situation. I'm sorry that you had to see that at such a young age hell I'm sorry you had to see it at all. You have given him respect and a way to live on through your poem and now his memory can be put to rest. Great Job Wolf-Chan.
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    Thank you ky-chan. I meant every word I said. I don't even know how I'm able to just speak freely about the incident now. But I'm glad I've moved on. And he helped me. Thank's for the comment, ky-chan! It means a lot.

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    Your very welcome just know that if you ever need anyone to talk to you can call me or I could call you. You live here in Florida so it's ok. I'm also but a pm away so you always know I'm here I'll pm you my number.
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    Thanks ky-chan. It's always nice to know that others will be there for you in times of need.

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    Ive never experienced something like that. I can only hope that you never have to experience that again. Your poem shows true human compassion that you can grieve for a stranger. I liked it.

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