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    My Shooting Star

    I just cant get it out my head.
    And I wonder why.
    Yet somehow, there's still tears to shed.
    Wishing apon a starless sky.

    All thats left in my posession.
    Is a dark and blackend night.
    Forgive me please, for my obsession.
    For my shooting star has taken flight.

    It wont come back, but Im still seeking.
    Suppose some people never learn.
    Out my window I am peaking.
    Though, there's no sign of its return.

    My wishes wander aimlessly,
    Floating in a midnight sea.
    Yet, I'm still wishing shamelessly,
    For what will never be.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: My Shooting Star

    this one is really awesome and wishing
    for that which will never come back
    is what most do because hoping againt
    hope is all that most have left.

    just like waiting for someone against
    all the odds because thats all you can do
    and thats what it will take to keep you sain.

    but dont let those tears drown you because
    eventualy a new shooting star will come but if you keep
    looking for the old one the new one will pass you by
    and you want notice.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My Shooting Star

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    but dont let those tears drown you because
    eventualy a new shooting star will come but if you keep
    looking for the old one the new one will pass you by
    and you want notice.

    Wow.... Boy have you hit the nail on the head.
    Thank you for your words.
    Speaking of me drowning in tears, you got me to shed a few more... But only because I was touched by what you said. It was like hearing exactly what I needed to hear, right when I needed to hear it. Thanks again.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: My Shooting Star

    your welcome and your peoms are really awesome
    and i can relate to them
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My Shooting Star

    Good poem it's hard wishing for something that may never come,but if you wish on that rare shooting star it just might. I can't wait to read your next one.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: My Shooting Star

    Thank you... I will try to come up with more... Im just trying not to recycle the same concept over and over. Its alot harder than I thought.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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