Thread: my silence

This poem inspires me.
I will make something that will make you take notes ok.
BRB.
(Good poem by the way)

@viper:....thank you *Smiles* im glad it inspires you...^ ^
@kedar:thnx...and i'll be posting more of my poems.....eventually

Originally Posted by Blou

o.o this is an old poem i wrote....

I wipe the tears running down my face
as im taken into the darkness.
You tear my heart, but don't feel its pain.
I wonder why these tears fall and I know the answer. I love you.
I love you forever, promising myself eternal heartache. I yell from the top of my lungs
but you do not hear me.
It is a silence that burns in my soul

Well..... I didnt feel it had a good flow 2 it. Its meaningful, yes.... but it didnt really click with me.
The last statement however... thats a keeper right there. ^_^