My Silent Angel

*Blade X* · Jan 19, 2007, 11:37 PM

My silent angel cries,
She weeps fpr the pain
I've caused her,
Yet she remains silent,
UNwilling to speak of what I've done to hurt her.

My silent angel cries,
She loves me still,
No matter what I've done,
She remains loyal to our love,
I do not deserve such love and devotion.

I wipe away my angel's tears,
I was a fool tp cause her pain,
Embracing he and giving everything to her,
I whisper, "I'm sorry, my sweet angel"
Gazing into her bright eyes,
I pressed my lips against hers,
My angel no longer weeps.
Nor will she ever be silent again.

this is to my gf, i'm sorry for the sadness i've caused you. i dont want to lose you. Not now, not ever..

Aya-kun · Jan 20, 2007, 04:07 AM

You are always dedicating poems to your gf(s) (>_<)o Baa!

*Blade X* · Jan 20, 2007, 04:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Aya-kun

You are always dedicating poems to your gf(s) (>_<)o Baa!

eehh?!? i only have one gf. this poem is to her. this is to tell her that i neve want to hurt her again

rksamurai · Jan 23, 2007, 01:58 PM

This a really sweet poem.. though you may want to proof read it one more time.. there are a few mistakes.. Blade, this poem really touched me like no other. Its also the first time I have really seen you say sorry..

*divine_punishment* · Jan 23, 2007, 02:04 PM

Can you feel the love tonight or what?! (Sorry, I'm listening to "In the Jungle" . . .)

kimchi24 · Jan 23, 2007, 04:46 PM

nice poem. its nice and soothing but liek at one part there was that thing that all girls hate: I do not deserve such love and devotion. from what i know they hate knowing that the person they chose thinks that he sucks for her.

anyways

i liek the poem but try makin it look cool by like placing it in a heat formation. those poems are sick

redeyed_impure_soul · Feb 02, 2007, 08:30 PM

Haha..Jason, you do always dedicate poems to your girlfriends...it's nice.
Though you do have a different girlfriend quite often...=P!

CherryBlossom18 · Feb 02, 2007, 09:24 PM

Oh that is such a sweet poem. It was so full of love and devotion you have for your girlfriend. I hope you two stay together forever. Good job and I can't wait to read your next one.

!The White Wolf · Feb 15, 2007, 02:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Aya-kun

You are always dedicating poems to your gf(s) (>_<)o Baa!

lol.

i love aya... haha...

but um, yes...this poem is very sweet....saying sorry for the crap you've caused your girl... ;] what a way to get brownie points with her..lol..

nice poem.

i've always loved your poems..

Quote:

Originally Posted by redeyed_impure_soul

Haha..Jason, you do always dedicate poems to your girlfriends...it's nice.
Though you do have a different girlfriend quite often...=P!

lol. these people crack me up.

o__o

'tis true, tho.....

AngelFlow · Feb 15, 2007, 02:28 PM

I like it, that was such a sweet poem you made for your gf.

Jan 19, 2007, 11:37 PM	#1 (permalink)
Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,446	My Silent Angel My silent angel cries, She weeps fpr the pain I've caused her, Yet she remains silent, UNwilling to speak of what I've done to hurt her. My silent angel cries, She loves me still, No matter what I've done, She remains loyal to our love, I do not deserve such love and devotion. I wipe away my angel's tears, I was a fool tp cause her pain, Embracing he and giving everything to her, I whisper, "I'm sorry, my sweet angel" Gazing into her bright eyes, I pressed my lips against hers, My angel no longer weeps. Nor will she ever be silent again. this is to my gf, i'm sorry for the sadness i've caused you. i dont want to lose you. Not now, not ever.. __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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Aya-kun Stray Sheep Join Date: May 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 905 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Credits: 6,613	Re: My Silent Angel You are always dedicating poems to your gf(s) (>_<)o Baa!
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rksamurai Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Within the arms of the one I love. Posts: 401 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,595	Re: My Silent Angel This a really sweet poem.. though you may want to proof read it one more time.. there are a few mistakes.. Blade, this poem really touched me like no other. Its also the first time I have really seen you say sorry.. __________________ Thank you Lasura! My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10
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kimchi24 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 818	Re: My Silent Angel nice poem. its nice and soothing but liek at one part there was that thing that all girls hate: I do not deserve such love and devotion. from what i know they hate knowing that the person they chose thinks that he sucks for her. anyways i liek the poem but try makin it look cool by like placing it in a heat formation. those poems are sick __________________ I praise the one who is able to win it all and still live for it...[/CENTER
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redeyed_impure_soul Newbie Join Date: May 2006 Location: Anywhere out of this world... Posts: 27 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,137	Re: My Silent Angel Haha..Jason, you do always dedicate poems to your girlfriends...it's nice. Though you do have a different girlfriend quite often...=P! __________________ I can feel you all around me, thickening the air I'm breathing. Holding on to what I'm feeling, savoring this heart that's healing.
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,326	Re: My Silent Angel Oh that is such a sweet poem. It was so full of love and devotion you have for your girlfriend. I hope you two stay together forever. Good job and I can't wait to read your next one. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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