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    My Silent Angel

    My silent angel cries,
    She weeps fpr the pain
    I've caused her,
    Yet she remains silent,
    UNwilling to speak of what I've done to hurt her.

    My silent angel cries,
    She loves me still,
    No matter what I've done,
    She remains loyal to our love,
    I do not deserve such love and devotion.

    I wipe away my angel's tears,
    I was a fool tp cause her pain,
    Embracing he and giving everything to her,
    I whisper, "I'm sorry, my sweet angel"
    Gazing into her bright eyes,
    I pressed my lips against hers,
    My angel no longer weeps.
    Nor will she ever be silent again.

    this is to my gf, i'm sorry for the sadness i've caused you. i dont want to lose you. Not now, not ever..

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    Re: My Silent Angel

    You are always dedicating poems to your gf(s) (>_<)o Baa!

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    Re: My Silent Angel

    Quote Originally Posted by Aya-kun View Post
    You are always dedicating poems to your gf(s) (>_<)o Baa!
    eehh?!? i only have one gf. this poem is to her. this is to tell her that i neve want to hurt her again

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    Re: My Silent Angel

    This a really sweet poem.. though you may want to proof read it one more time.. there are a few mistakes.. Blade, this poem really touched me like no other. Its also the first time I have really seen you say sorry..
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    Re: My Silent Angel

    Can you feel the love tonight or what?! (Sorry, I'm listening to "In the Jungle" . . .)

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    Re: My Silent Angel

    nice poem. its nice and soothing but liek at one part there was that thing that all girls hate: I do not deserve such love and devotion. from what i know they hate knowing that the person they chose thinks that he sucks for her.

    anyways

    i liek the poem but try makin it look cool by like placing it in a heat formation. those poems are sick


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    Re: My Silent Angel

    Haha..Jason, you do always dedicate poems to your girlfriends...it's nice.
    Though you do have a different girlfriend quite often...=P!

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    Re: My Silent Angel

    Oh that is such a sweet poem. It was so full of love and devotion you have for your girlfriend. I hope you two stay together forever. Good job and I can't wait to read your next one.
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