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    To My Sister

    **I love my sister to death, it's just I was really hurt when I wrote this poem. So please do not get the idea that I am a heartless sibling, because I can assure you that it is the total opposite.



    You know something?
    I don't like you.

    No. Better yet.. I hate you.
    Why do you always insist on instigating every little issue that occurs.
    Yeah, I might not be a perfect daughter or sister, but hey. Back off.

    Once I've heard enough bad things about me.. said to me.. I start to believe it.
    I get enough bullshit from my mom. Your mom. I don't need crap from you.

    You want to know something else?
    I couldn't wait for mom to go into labor when i found out the kid was going to be a girl.
    That I was going to be a big sister.
    That I was going to have a little sister, someone I've always wanted.

    That I would protect you and hold you forever.


    What happened to that feeling. The euphoria. That happiness that once was.

    I can no longer smile. It's hard to just, "pretend" that everything is all right.

    So WHAT, you're a little younger than me? Age can sometimes be just a number.
    You know perfectly well what you do, so you cannot use that against you.

    You make my life a living hell.

    It's okay, though. I still love you.

    I do..
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    Re: To My Sister

    Ah. Nice start and an "awwwwww" end. Nice description off your feelings. i like your poems a lot.

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    I am glad that you enjoy reading my poems. This one were a bunch of welled up feelings that I just had to let out. I'm surprised it came out the way it did.

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    Exactly, if there is anything else you want to let out you can add in there ^_^ Or just a few changes and the poem would really be better, not saying it's not good, it's great

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    Awwwwwww! it so sums up the feeling one has about una hermanita. it really is a living hell living around them though huh? especially if ur mom spoils her. Hee Hee Hee! neway, great writing. the good ones always do come from expressing feelings, don't they.
    Life's short so have a laugh about it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Ah. Nice start and an "awwwwww" end. Nice description off your feelings. i like your poems a lot.
    I would have to agree with rave... they are unique...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Serenity Carter View Post
    Awwwwwww! it so sums up the feeling one has about una hermanita. it really is a living hell living around them though huh? especially if ur mom spoils her. Hee Hee Hee! neway, great writing. the good ones always do come from expressing feelings, don't they.
    Yes, they can make your life very very difficult, by they are still your blood, whom you have to protect and love always, no matter what. You might not like them.. but you'll always love them. And that is what's important.

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    I would have to agree with rave... they are unique...
    Thank you. I am glad that you enjoy my poems. Really, all these comments that people leave inspire me to write more.

    Thank you guys.

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    I'm trying to read random poems and yours was the best and scariest. It gives me the chills but Its awesome really. Awesome job really!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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