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    My Son

    Why did you leave me?
    Why did you leave with my son?
    You took off without leaving a letter
    I know you had to run.

    Somewhere you couldn't be found
    But at least let me see my boy
    I wanna give him a present
    Like a soldier toy.

    Just let me hold him
    Hugging him as long as I can
    Let me tell him
    How to be a very strong man.

    Teach him who to survive
    Through day and night
    Only to fight with words
    But I know he'll do it right.

    He doesn't need me much
    Not as long he has his mother
    Only thing he'll remember
    That am his only father.

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    Wow, this poem deffinately touched something in me, seeing as how I am a mother and all. It was like I could be at the opposing side of this. (Only my sons fathers would never say that to me). They either ARE there, or they have "more important" things to do.

    Seems like these days its so easy to walk away. Its rare you see a father fight for their child.
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    Thanks Peach, I sometimes think about it too, but I dedicated this poem to a cousin of mine, so pretty much we're claiming each other as brother's.

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    that was really cool i agrree with peach-follows you dont see vey many fathers these days (mine ive only nown for 6 months)but im happy to see that you are better than the rest

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    OH WOW!!!!!! *In shock* This poem is so emotional! So touching and deep as well! This poem really amaze me real badly! I hope to see more ok!
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    i really like this poem because i think a lot of people can relate to what your saying.
    Last edited by missbad818; Apr 30, 2009 at 10:33 AM.
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    Re: My Son

    Quote Originally Posted by missbad818 View Post
    i really like this poem because i think a lot of people can relate to what your saying.
    Heh, you must really have gone back through the (p)ages. The previous reply dates back to the summer of 2007.

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