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 Upcoming Legend  Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The deepest Abyss of the Ocean
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 Credits: 18,517 | My song The song in my heart makes want to leap for joy. it reminds me of days when everything was alive but now regret fills me i never got to say how i felt how much i long to hold you. Memories haunt me your laughter still lingers, your touch still burns. how i should have said i loved you dearly. now i know that i can never say the words. Now i know you not be mine. Call me a fool , call me naive Yet this song continues to say I love you in the most unconditonal way.
__________________ You know when you have found your prince, because you not only have a smile on your face but in your heart as well.  Clan Rainstorm 2nd Company, Kunoichi Division Leader. 5 Kunai Last edited by PhoenixSara; May 02, 2008 at 09:52 AM. Reason: correcting the poem |
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: death and life again
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Credits: 12,561 | Re: My song good poem but there is a problem >.< the format... the end of the lines have little or no ",,,,,,," >.< thats all ^.^
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