My song

PhoenixSara · May 02, 2008, 10:51 AM

The song in my heart
makes want to leap for joy.
it reminds me of days
when everything was alive

but now regret fills me
i never got to say how i felt
how much i long to hold you.

Memories haunt me
your laughter still lingers,
your touch still burns.

how i should have said i loved you dearly.
now i know that i can never say the words.
Now i know you not be mine.

Call me a fool , call me naive
Yet this song continues to say
I love you in the most unconditonal way.

basilisk888 · May 02, 2008, 10:53 AM

good poem but there is a problem >.< the format... the end of the lines have little or no ",,,,,,," >.< thats all ^.^

May 02, 2008, 10:51 AM	#1 (permalink)
PhoenixSara Rogue Vamp Slayer/Fallen Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: I am in between Heaven's Gate and Hell.Angels are not supposed to fall but i did. Posts: 1,008 Thanks: 38 Thanked 56 Times in 52 Posts	My song The song in my heart makes want to leap for joy. it reminds me of days when everything was alive but now regret fills me i never got to say how i felt how much i long to hold you. Memories haunt me your laughter still lingers, your touch still burns. how i should have said i loved you dearly. now i know that i can never say the words. Now i know you not be mine. Call me a fool , call me naive Yet this song continues to say I love you in the most unconditonal way. __________________ "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends." Clan Rainstorm 2nd Company, Kunoichi Leader PhoenixSara Myspace / Click Me IMVU/Atlantis RPG/Rules and FAQ/MY BLOG / Last edited by PhoenixSara; May 02, 2008 at 10:52 AM. Reason: correcting the poem
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May 02, 2008, 10:53 AM	#2 (permalink)
basilisk888 hmmm... wat ta put =3... Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: death and life again Posts: 649 Thanks: 13 Thanked 24 Times in 23 Posts	Re: My song good poem but there is a problem >.< the format... the end of the lines have little or no ",,,,,,," >.< thats all ^.^ __________________ death and life are one and the same
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