good poem but there is a problem >.< the format... the end of the lines have little or no ",,,,,,," >.< thats all ^.^
The song in my heart
makes want to leap for joy.
it reminds me of days
when everything was alive
but now regret fills me
i never got to say how i felt
how much i long to hold you.
Memories haunt me
your laughter still lingers,
your touch still burns.
how i should have said i loved you dearly.
now i know that i can never say the words.
Now i know you not be mine.
Call me a fool , call me naive
Yet this song continues to say
I love you in the most unconditonal way.
Last edited by PhoenixSara; May 02, 2008 at 09:52 AM. Reason: correcting the poem
"In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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good poem but there is a problem >.< the format... the end of the lines have little or no ",,,,,,," >.< thats all ^.^
death and life are one and the same
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