my song lyrics

hi its bryan here... this is the lyrics to my song im working on (battle for one)

Let’s drop eh!
Crawling up from that hole you dug for me.
Now I see how I got there in the first place.
Finally I realize what you really are … a burden on my soul.
It’s time we go our separate ways, I don’t need you this way.

Its time I did myself some good, it’s the battle for one. I should have done this long ago, before you took over control. So this time watch me bleed, so that I can be free.

Now can you see, I’m getting back what is me?
Now I’m finally free, after my victory.
You are gone I am here, why don’t I just start here.
My head rises up, with rain pouring down.
My head rises up, with rain pouring down.
Look what I have found, I have found again.
Yeah! … Yeah!
My head rises up, with rain pouring down.
My head rises up, with rain pouring down.
Look what I have found, I have found again.

Sounds nice, what kind of music do you try to emulate, and is this the chorus?

hmmm looks pretty good to me ^^ nice job =] :2thumbs:

kinda emo...i think...what are you trying to tell in your lyric...and is it a rock music??
But overall it's cool...great job...