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    「Someone」 Goo Slasher Champion, Fish Kill Champion, Rapid Motion Champion, Cell-Out Champion, Sober Santa 2 Champion, Flower Girl Champion KuwiRules145 is off to a good start KuwiRules145's Avatar
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    My Story

    One boy met me
    He was that first thing I see
    But I was blind
    He kept a appearing in my mind
    So now I'm scared
    Finding out I really cared
    So I shut my eyes
    Pretending it was all lies

    But I was wrong
    I can't believe it took me so long
    Now I believe
    You were that everything I received
    So now I know I really love you
    Making me say I do
    Your everything I always thought
    Making me always love you a lot

    So we know
    Now our hearts aren't very low
    But trouble came along
    As our feeling to become a song
    My heart it burns for being so lame
    So I quietly turned off my eyes with shame
    Finding myself waiting for my knight drifting away
    As I wait on that same hill everyday

    I don't want to hide my feelings too
    All I want was only you
    There I finally kissed your face
    And prepared for what we could embrace
    I look at the sky for my cloud
    As it stays still catching my doubts
    But I don't care anymore
    As we both sat on that same shore

    I just want to live happily ever after
    As our family is happy with laughter

    Hope everyone likes it.
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; May 31, 2007 at 08:51 AM. Reason: Grammer mistake hehehe....
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My Story

    awwww you wrote me a poem! lol j/k very sweet poem. nice length,and I can really feel the emotion youve put forth! cant wait till ure next one.

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    Re: My Story

    I thank you a lot for your comment but remember it could be any boy I know ok. But that boy should know who he is. I have lots of guy friends so its hard to tell who's it for. And I know who's it for and he does too.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    i like it. i can tell you put a lot of effort into it. it like you said tells a story. from begining to end it's like a story being told.
    every rose has a thorn

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    I thank you so much sangogirl as well! I thank you two so much right now.
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    hey nice poem i havent heard one that wasn't basically the same as everyone elses that iv'e heard. it was really nice and had really good detail i like that


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    Thank you so much as well! I'm really happy you guys a lot!!!! I thank you all!
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    Re: My Story

    mabye i came in wrong place cuse this poem for boys ...but it touch as i mean the girl ...
    that was very romanitic poem and explain mabye how the people love ...but it was very nice ...i like it ...keep up ..hope to see more form you ...

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