KuwiRules145

One boy met me
He was that first thing I see
But I was blind
He kept a appearing in my mind
So now I'm scared
Finding out I really cared
So I shut my eyes
Pretending it was all lies

But I was wrong
I can't believe it took me so long
Now I believe
You were that everything I received
So now I know I really love you
Making me say I do
Your everything I always thought
Making me always love you a lot

So we know
Now our hearts aren't very low
But trouble came along
As our feeling to become a song
My heart it burns for being so lame
So I quietly turned off my eyes with shame
Finding myself waiting for my knight drifting away
As I wait on that same hill everyday

I don't want to hide my feelings too
All I want was only you
There I finally kissed your face
And prepared for what we could embrace
I look at the sky for my cloud
As it stays still catching my doubts
But I don't care anymore
As we both sat on that same shore

I just want to live happily ever after
As our family is happy with laughter

Hope everyone likes it.

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fallenangel25

awwww you wrote me a poem! lol j/k very sweet poem. nice length,and I can really feel the emotion youve put forth! cant wait till ure next one.

KuwiRules145

I thank you a lot for your comment but remember it could be any boy I know ok. But that boy should know who he is. I have lots of guy friends so its hard to tell who's it for. And I know who's it for and he does too.

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sangogirl

i like it. i can tell you put a lot of effort into it. it like you said tells a story. from begining to end it's like a story being told.

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KuwiRules145

I thank you so much sangogirl as well! I thank you two so much right now.

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ChaosXIII

hey nice poem i havent heard one that wasn't basically the same as everyone elses that iv'e heard. it was really nice and had really good detail i like that

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Iv'e come to deliver some bad luck

KuwiRules145

Thank you so much as well! I'm really happy you guys a lot!!!! I thank you all!

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xxoxx

mabye i came in wrong place cuse this poem for boys ...but it touch as i mean the girl ...
that was very romanitic poem and explain mabye how the people love ...but it was very nice ...i like it ...keep up ..hope to see more form you ...