My Story - Page 2

*Lasura* · May 31, 2007, 03:36 AM

I like this poem very much... You have a wonderful story here, a wonderful story indeed, full of adventure, love, exitment and waiting...
The only thing I didn't like was the first line: "One boy meet me". But it's just because of grammar...

It didn't buzz me in other places but this line cought my attention badly...
But I enjoyed reading it and when I finnished reading it I was happy I decided to read it!!!!!

*KuwiRules145* · May 31, 2007, 09:50 AM

Sorry I forgot! I'll just fix it right now and thank you for your comments as well!!!!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · May 31, 2007, 11:06 AM

i like this poem the love the passion its all there and
it was a poem about happiness its cool that you could make one after everythig i have read about why people cant make a happy poem.

this one proves it donst have to be sad to be a poem which i like alot
i cant wait to read another

*KuwiRules145* · May 31, 2007, 01:01 PM

Oh I thank you so much for that comment! I will make more anyway! I'll try my best and thank you as well!

May 31, 2007, 03:36 AM	#9 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,885 Thanks: 56 Thanked 38 Times in 35 Posts	Re: My Story I like this poem very much... You have a wonderful story here, a wonderful story indeed, full of adventure, love, exitment and waiting... The only thing I didn't like was the first line: "One boy meet me". But it's just because of grammar... It didn't buzz me in other places but this line cought my attention badly... But I enjoyed reading it and when I finnished reading it I was happy I decided to read it!!!!! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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May 31, 2007, 09:50 AM	#10 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 4 Thanked 25 Times in 17 Posts	Re: My Story Sorry I forgot! I'll just fix it right now and thank you for your comments as well!!!! __________________ Pop (o.o) click to show spoiler I Thought I was being smart by hiding a sig image that was against AO policy in a spoiler tag. I was wrong. I'm not smart. -Not really o.o
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,940 Thanks: 62 Thanked 55 Times in 52 Posts	Re: My Story i like this poem the love the passion its all there and it was a poem about happiness its cool that you could make one after everythig i have read about why people cant make a happy poem. this one proves it donst have to be sad to be a poem which i like alot i cant wait to read another __________________
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May 31, 2007, 01:01 PM	#12 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 4 Thanked 25 Times in 17 Posts	Re: My Story Oh I thank you so much for that comment! I will make more anyway! I'll try my best and thank you as well! __________________ Pop (o.o) click to show spoiler I Thought I was being smart by hiding a sig image that was against AO policy in a spoiler tag. I was wrong. I'm not smart. -Not really o.o
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