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    Re: My Story

    I like this poem very much... You have a wonderful story here, a wonderful story indeed, full of adventure, love, exitment and waiting...
    The only thing I didn't like was the first line: "One boy meet me". But it's just because of grammar... It didn't buzz me in other places but this line cought my attention badly...
    But I enjoyed reading it and when I finnished reading it I was happy I decided to read it!!!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Sorry I forgot! I'll just fix it right now and thank you for your comments as well!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My Story

    i like this poem the love the passion its all there and
    it was a poem about happiness its cool that you could make one after everythig i have read about why people cant make a happy poem.

    this one proves it donst have to be sad to be a poem which i like alot
    i cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My Story

    Oh I thank you so much for that comment! I will make more anyway! I'll try my best and thank you as well!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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