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    "my suicide"

    I hide behind a mask of lies,
    I'm not who I am,
    But dark and hurt and sad inside.

    I contemplate suicide,
    Dream the day of my last breath,
    Cut myself to ease the pain,
    But you dont even know the rest.

    I can never show the me that I hide inside,
    For no one will understand,
    And think I'm out of my mind.

    To end my pain I must die,
    I'll be better off dead,
    Than living a lie.

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    Re: "my suicide"

    That was very deep flaminghate and sad but I understand what you were feeling in that moment when you wrote that poem for I feel almost the same way especially this part "I hide behind a mask of lies, I'm not who I am, But dark and hurt and sad inside." I can truly understand and relate to what I feel almost everyday...great job keep up the good work and I can't wait to hear more!!

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    Re: "my suicide"

    Hmmm another emo poem... :/ but i like the way u express the feelings in this poem ^^
    keep up the good work

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    Re: "my suicide"

    yeah it's emo but it's so cool! because you used great emotion in it good job hope to see more!^^



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    Re: "my suicide"

    Oh?~ I'm just curious. So a person who tries to commit suicide must've been reckless... But are you trying to express how the person who wants to die feels? It's funny, but I feel like it's a bit stupid. It wouldn't be that nice to have the thoughts to see someone you know die and then leave you with all the mess she's done... But anyway, it's a good one to me^_^ . I meant to say your poem. One of my cousins attempt to kill herself last time. She was- well, that's personal *nod* But thank you, flamminghate. I might caught her attention to give her a copy of these.
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: "my suicide"

    Quote Originally Posted by flaminghate View Post
    I hide behind a mask of lies,
    I'm not who I am,
    But dark and hurt and sad inside.

    I contemplate suicide,
    Dream the day of my last breath,
    Cut myself to ease the pain,
    But you dont even know the rest.

    I can never show the me that I hide inside,
    For no one will understand,
    And think I'm out of my mind.

    To end my pain I must die,
    I'll be better off dead,
    Than living a lie.
    Very good Poem. I have to say Be there doen that! I don't recommed someone trying to do that. I acually like the first part of this poem.

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    Re: "my suicide"

    some real emotions come from this one
    and i can see where your coming from because
    no one really understands they just pretend to so
    you can have some kind of fake security that dosnt
    last long , this poem is really awesome .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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