Thread: "my suicide"

That was very deep flaminghate and sad but I understand what you were feeling in that moment when you wrote that poem for I feel almost the same way especially this part "I hide behind a mask of lies, I'm not who I am, But dark and hurt and sad inside." I can truly understand and relate to what I feel almost everyday...great job keep up the good work and I can't wait to hear more!!

Hmmm another emo poem... :/ but i like the way u express the feelings in this poem ^^
keep up the good work

yeah it's emo but it's so cool! because you used great emotion in it good job hope to see more!^^

Oh?~ I'm just curious. So a person who tries to commit suicide must've been reckless... But are you trying to express how the person who wants to die feels? It's funny, but I feel like it's a bit stupid. It wouldn't be that nice to have the thoughts to see someone you know die and then leave you with all the mess she's done... But anyway, it's a good one to me^_^ . I meant to say your poem. One of my cousins attempt to kill herself last time. She was- well, that's personal *nod* But thank you, flamminghate. I might caught her attention to give her a copy of these.

Originally Posted by flaminghate

I hide behind a mask of lies,
I'm not who I am,
But dark and hurt and sad inside.

I contemplate suicide,
Dream the day of my last breath,
Cut myself to ease the pain,
But you dont even know the rest.

I can never show the me that I hide inside,
For no one will understand,
And think I'm out of my mind.

To end my pain I must die,
I'll be better off dead,
Than living a lie.

Very good Poem. I have to say Be there doen that! I don't recommed someone trying to do that. I acually like the first part of this poem.

some real emotions come from this one
and i can see where your coming from because
no one really understands they just pretend to so
you can have some kind of fake security that dosnt
last long , this poem is really awesome .