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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,783 | "my suicide" I hide behind a mask of lies, I'm not who I am, But dark and hurt and sad inside. I contemplate suicide, Dream the day of my last breath, Cut myself to ease the pain, But you dont even know the rest. I can never show the me that I hide inside, For no one will understand, And think I'm out of my mind. To end my pain I must die, I'll be better off dead, Than living a lie. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 616 | Re: "my suicide" That was very deep flaminghate and sad but I understand what you were feeling in that moment when you wrote that poem for I feel almost the same way especially this part "I hide behind a mask of lies, I'm not who I am, But dark and hurt and sad inside." I can truly understand and relate to what I feel almost everyday...great job keep up the good work and I can't wait to hear more!!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,502 | Re: "my suicide" Hmmm another emo poem... :/ but i like the way u express the feelings in this poem ^^ keep up the good work |
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Otaku | Re: "my suicide" Oh?~ I'm just curious. So a person who tries to commit suicide must've been reckless... But are you trying to express how the person who wants to die feels? It's funny, but I feel like it's a bit stupid. It wouldn't be that nice to have the thoughts to see someone you know die and then leave you with all the mess she's done... But anyway, it's a good one to me^_^ . I meant to say your poem. One of my cousins attempt to kill herself last time. She was- well, that's personal *nod* But thank you, flamminghate. I might caught her attention to give her a copy of these.
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![]() Credits: 3,544 | Re: "my suicide" Quote:
I acually like the first part of this poem. | |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,581 | Re: "my suicide" some real emotions come from this one and i can see where your coming from because no one really understands they just pretend to so you can have some kind of fake security that dosnt last long , this poem is really awesome .
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