My Survival

*solking* · Nov 21, 2006, 07:29 AM

It seems like I can never die
Everytime I try to take my life
I only grow stronger
Becoming immune to pain I inflict
Upon myself

I gave away everything that I was
Everything that I am
Everything that I wanted to be
But I'm still here
Incapable of death

I broke my own heart
And someone held on to the pieces
Trying to heal my wounds
But instead I grew a new one
One that will never be scarred again

I gave away my soul
I gave it away because I didn't deserve it
But it found me
Never wanting to leave my side
And with it I gain real strength

I lost my Spirit
My closest Friend
Because I let the world kick me when I was down
But I never really lost Him
He was there carrying me through the pain

Now here I am
A complete man
One who can't die until the mission is over
Because the whole world may come down to one thing
My Survival

This is was written over a year ago. Found it last night while digging up the past.

Sazzy · Nov 21, 2006, 08:18 AM

i love that one Solking...ok i can't relate to all of it but its still cool

lightningsykes · Nov 21, 2006, 08:49 AM

That is really good man loved the use of words I can strongly relate to what you are saying

Serenity Carter · Nov 21, 2006, 09:12 AM

Hey, loved ur poem.

it really touched something in me. it's a feeling like someone is preventin u from letting go? as if u hav to b here for some unknown reason?

Well, i guess since u found it from digin up the past, i assume whomever got through that stage in their life? Well, why do u think this person u write of needs to survive... if it's not ur story and 2 personal...

*solking* · Nov 21, 2006, 09:20 AM

Thanx everyone for the comments. It seems the past is catching up to the future. so this is just setup for a whole new set of poems once the past gets put away for good.

3x3ninja · Nov 22, 2006, 09:21 AM

i cant totally relate i think its an awesome piece of work you have

Nov 21, 2006, 07:29 AM	#1 (permalink)
solking 4.01 M33-2 Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In Posts: 1,493 Thanks: 3 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 13,163	My Survival It seems like I can never die Everytime I try to take my life I only grow stronger Becoming immune to pain I inflict Upon myself I gave away everything that I was Everything that I am Everything that I wanted to be But I'm still here Incapable of death I broke my own heart And someone held on to the pieces Trying to heal my wounds But instead I grew a new one One that will never be scarred again I gave away my soul I gave it away because I didn't deserve it But it found me Never wanting to leave my side And with it I gain real strength I lost my Spirit My closest Friend Because I let the world kick me when I was down But I never really lost Him He was there carrying me through the pain Now here I am A complete man One who can't die until the mission is over Because the whole world may come down to one thing My Survival This is was written over a year ago. Found it last night while digging up the past. __________________
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Sazzy Member of 22 yr old Club Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: In my imagination restricted by British Society! Posts: 1,798 Thanks: 7 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts Credits: 32,471	Re: My Survival i love that one Solking...ok i can't relate to all of it but its still cool __________________ FAVOURITE THREADS EXPLAIN why, or risk an infraction. *Will no long use any signatures.. only on forums that appreciate my effort.*
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Nov 21, 2006, 09:12 AM	#4 (permalink)
Serenity Carter Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Trinidad, D Caribbean Posts: 47 Thanks: 5 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 689	Re: My Survival Hey, loved ur poem. it really touched something in me. it's a feeling like someone is preventin u from letting go? as if u hav to b here for some unknown reason? Well, i guess since u found it from digin up the past, i assume whomever got through that stage in their life? Well, why do u think this person u write of needs to survive... if it's not ur story and 2 personal... __________________ Life's short so have a laugh about it
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solking 4.01 M33-2 Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In Posts: 1,493 Thanks: 3 Thanked 8 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 13,163	Re: My Survival Thanx everyone for the comments. It seems the past is catching up to the future. so this is just setup for a whole new set of poems once the past gets put away for good. __________________
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