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    My Survival

    It seems like I can never die
    Everytime I try to take my life
    I only grow stronger
    Becoming immune to pain I inflict
    Upon myself

    I gave away everything that I was
    Everything that I am
    Everything that I wanted to be
    But I'm still here
    Incapable of death

    I broke my own heart
    And someone held on to the pieces
    Trying to heal my wounds
    But instead I grew a new one
    One that will never be scarred again

    I gave away my soul
    I gave it away because I didn't deserve it
    But it found me
    Never wanting to leave my side
    And with it I gain real strength

    I lost my Spirit
    My closest Friend
    Because I let the world kick me when I was down
    But I never really lost Him
    He was there carrying me through the pain

    Now here I am
    A complete man
    One who can't die until the mission is over
    Because the whole world may come down to one thing
    My Survival


    This is was written over a year ago. Found it last night while digging up the past.

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    Re: My Survival

    i love that one Solking...ok i can't relate to all of it but its still cool
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    Re: My Survival

    That is really good man loved the use of words I can strongly relate to what you are saying

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    Hey, loved ur poem. it really touched something in me. it's a feeling like someone is preventin u from letting go? as if u hav to b here for some unknown reason?

    Well, i guess since u found it from digin up the past, i assume whomever got through that stage in their life? Well, why do u think this person u write of needs to survive... if it's not ur story and 2 personal...
    Life's short so have a laugh about it

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    Re: My Survival

    Thanx everyone for the comments. It seems the past is catching up to the future. so this is just setup for a whole new set of poems once the past gets put away for good.

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    Re: My Survival

    i cant totally relate i think its an awesome piece of work you have


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