My Throat Is An Open Grave

powerxxx · Sep 07, 2006, 06:32 PM

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feelings and words, the pieces that were meant to stay here between loving and the loved , but that was only a dream, words are stuck in people's hearts with no trace, the truth hidden so deeply no one could ever the pure truth of this world, but why are people speaking the truth and it's unheard, or screaming for help and having an unreplied answer, and how come i am trying to say all that to my love and she never listens to me.

Stuck between the guilty and the insincere
We stood against each other
To see each others face
And trying to say grace
But my words seemed to disappear with out a trace
I stayed down with my hearts pain
And feelings that would never fade
It turned that will never be the same
Broken parallel lines
With nothing to analyze
Everything was set to make me realize
All the love the was so gone
And i never realized it for so long
Geuss i could never be moving on
This isn't me i used to see
It was you trying to be me
Why don't you my life be
AND leave my life and me
Youbroke my heart once
While i was waiting for a dance
Just a dance for only once
I wished for that just once
And because of you
All the love I had was so gone
Now i can't stop bleeding
My heart can't stop sleeping
And my soul can't begin healing
What was scared in my heart
now
My pain is beyond repair
This isn't the happiness i used to see
Because all the love that used to be
Between you and me
Was announced that it was never meant to be
But i never cared
I wanted you so badly next to me
Because you meant alot to me
And yet
You left
How Come Did You Have To Leave ?
Didn't you hear me screaming
" DON'T , PLEASE!!!
please don't leave.......
I LOVE YOU SO....."
All the words flew past you
Unheard
And unfelt
All the words i said
Never again shall they rise from my heart
Even if i tried to say the words and feelings in my heart
They don't have a place to go to
A place to be heard or felt
All the words are
Stuck in my throat
Stuck in it's own gave
Without a trace
I now know
My Throat Is An Open grave

*Baal* · Sep 07, 2006, 06:39 PM

Hmph (concentrate)

sad,dark and kind with love
its awesome so u got dumped?

powerxxx · Sep 07, 2006, 07:07 PM

hmmmnnn.
no i never got dumped ,

*Kasai* · Sep 08, 2006, 02:42 AM

Spelling and actual stanzas would make me read the poem. I love the title, now the rest of the poem must be good too.

*BlueFox1* · Sep 09, 2006, 02:11 AM

I like the way this is written! It's like trying to tell that person you love them, but the words don't come out or they just act like they didn't even hear you! Awesome!!!

"Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."

BlueFox1

Sep 07, 2006, 06:39 PM	#2 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 409	Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave Hmph (concentrate) sad,dark and kind with love its awesome so u got dumped? __________________ perdoname michelle!
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Sep 07, 2006, 07:07 PM	#3 (permalink)
powerxxx Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere on this planet Posts: 131 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave hmmmnnn. no i never got dumped , __________________ Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali I Fly Swiftly through the air I Spread My Wings Without A trace
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Sep 08, 2006, 02:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,616	Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave Spelling and actual stanzas would make me read the poem. I love the title, now the rest of the poem must be good too. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Sep 09, 2006, 02:11 AM	#5 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Devoted Otaku Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,286	Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave I like the way this is written! It's like trying to tell that person you love them, but the words don't come out or they just act like they didn't even hear you! Awesome!!! "Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand." BlueFox1
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