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    My Throat Is An Open Grave

    feelings and words, the pieces that were meant to stay here between loving and the loved , but that was only a dream, words are stuck in people's hearts with no trace, the truth hidden so deeply no one could ever the pure truth of this world, but why are people speaking the truth and it's unheard, or screaming for help and having an unreplied answer, and how come i am trying to say all that to my love and she never listens to me.
    Stuck between the guilty and the insincere
    We stood against each other
    To see each others face
    And trying to say grace
    But my words seemed to disappear with out a trace
    I stayed down with my hearts pain
    And feelings that would never fade
    It turned that will never be the same
    Broken parallel lines
    With nothing to analyze
    Everything was set to make me realize
    All the love the was so gone
    And i never realized it for so long
    Geuss i could never be moving on
    This isn't me i used to see
    It was you trying to be me
    Why don't you my life be
    AND leave my life and me
    Youbroke my heart once
    While i was waiting for a dance
    Just a dance for only once
    I wished for that just once
    And because of you
    All the love I had was so gone
    Now i can't stop bleeding
    My heart can't stop sleeping
    And my soul can't begin healing
    What was scared in my heart
    now
    My pain is beyond repair
    This isn't the happiness i used to see
    Because all the love that used to be
    Between you and me
    Was announced that it was never meant to be
    But i never cared
    I wanted you so badly next to me
    Because you meant alot to me
    And yet
    You left
    How Come Did You Have To Leave ?
    Didn't you hear me screaming
    " DON'T , PLEASE!!!
    please don't leave.......
    I LOVE YOU SO....."
    All the words flew past you
    Unheard
    And unfelt
    All the words i said
    Never again shall they rise from my heart
    Even if i tried to say the words and feelings in my heart
    They don't have a place to go to
    A place to be heard or felt
    All the words are
    Stuck in my throat
    Stuck in it's own gave
    Without a trace
    I now know
    My Throat Is An Open grave
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave

    Hmph (concentrate)

    sad,dark and kind with love
    its awesome so u got dumped?



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave

    hmmmnnn.
    no i never got dumped ,
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave

    Spelling and actual stanzas would make me read the poem. I love the title, now the rest of the poem must be good too.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: My Throat Is An Open Grave

    I like the way this is written! It's like trying to tell that person you love them, but the words don't come out or they just act like they didn't even hear you! Awesome!!!

    "Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."

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