My True Feelings

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Oct 29, 2006, 03:58 PM

I walk this path alone there's
no one to be here with as my anger
starts to build i think of you then i scream,
HOW AM I SUPOSED TO BE THE SAME WITHOUT
YOU!!! i walk on as my memories feel me with pain.

My heart rages every time i see you with him
i ball my hands up out fear for hurting him knowing
that he has you. i so badly want you back as i believe
that nothing will ever change between us i scream again
WHY MUST MY HEART HAVE HATE WHEN I WANT LOVE?
THERE NOTHING I WANT MORE THAN HAVING YOU!!!.

I stand there with a tear not the kind that's sad
but the kind that makes you wonder why life
is so damned cruel ,i picture you in my head as i get
angrier at him wanting his heart ripped from his still
breathing chest as i watch you run to me.

Life what the hell is it like this i want you here
but it won't happen because he has your heart .
i just feel so torn apart for you, knowing you are
with him when it should be me.

I am sincere with my feelings for you that
will be always true because of my love for you
as i near the end of my path my thoughts of you
go but my anger will stay as i live on with hate.

this poem is about frustrations on love and how
it makes some guy's feel since girls really dont feel this
way as there too open most of them anyway,but this poem
is from my point of view a guy.

Sincere · Oct 29, 2006, 04:01 PM

Wow. That was...that was very heartfelt. I can tell how this makes you feel and it's good that you let it out in poetry because your poems are so good. This was very nice with expressing your feelings, which is what poetry is all about. I can't wait to read more.

CherryBlossom18 · Oct 29, 2006, 11:33 PM

that was a very sweet poem. It had all the right emotions to touch your heart which is what it did to me. You continue to keep up your awesome work and I already know your next story is gonna be a great one.

raja_psyche · Oct 31, 2006, 06:31 AM

This poem is filled with so much feelings into it. this poem lets the reader picture out your true feelings. this poem also shows the reality of a lost love, the hurts and pains. i liked your set of wordings. But you have to work on the capitalizations and some punctuations. but all in all , Great job on this!!!

Quote:

WHY MUST MY HEART HAVE HATE WHEN I WANT LOVE?

>this line touched me the most.

Shippo101 · Oct 31, 2006, 06:46 AM

Wow

Quote:

WHY MUST MY HEART HAVE HATE WHEN I WANT LOVE?
THERE NOTHING I WANT MORE THAN HAVING YOU!!!.

This one rocks so hard i love it i love the emotions in it.

xxoxx · Apr 11, 2007, 06:38 AM

Life is full of magic and miracles…

Something wonderful happening every minute.
A life being saved.
A baby being born.

Moments of greed and anger hide these truths.

Look for the day you are happy.
Hold that moment…
Because it is yours.

Treasure the days that you have a smile.
Remember the ones that gave you that treasure.

Think of the one you love; the one that stands by you…
That takes your steps with you.

You are never alone!

Everyone has a miracle…
Just so happens…
You are mine.
cute and nice ....good job keep upp ...

Oct 29, 2006, 03:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,783 Thanks: 20 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 2,476	My True Feelings I walk this path alone there's no one to be here with as my anger starts to build i think of you then i scream, HOW AM I SUPOSED TO BE THE SAME WITHOUT YOU!!! i walk on as my memories feel me with pain. My heart rages every time i see you with him i ball my hands up out fear for hurting him knowing that he has you. i so badly want you back as i believe that nothing will ever change between us i scream again WHY MUST MY HEART HAVE HATE WHEN I WANT LOVE? THERE NOTHING I WANT MORE THAN HAVING YOU!!!. I stand there with a tear not the kind that's sad but the kind that makes you wonder why life is so damned cruel ,i picture you in my head as i get angrier at him wanting his heart ripped from his still breathing chest as i watch you run to me. Life what the hell is it like this i want you here but it won't happen because he has your heart . i just feel so torn apart for you, knowing you are with him when it should be me. I am sincere with my feelings for you that will be always true because of my love for you as i near the end of my path my thoughts of you go but my anger will stay as i live on with hate. this poem is about frustrations on love and how it makes some guy's feel since girls really dont feel this way as there too open most of them anyway,but this poem is from my point of view a guy. __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Sincere Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart Posts: 307 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 364	Re: My True Feelings Wow. That was...that was very heartfelt. I can tell how this makes you feel and it's good that you let it out in poetry because your poems are so good. This was very nice with expressing your feelings, which is what poetry is all about. I can't wait to read more. __________________ $C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg$ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,166	Re: My True Feelings that was a very sweet poem. It had all the right emotions to touch your heart which is what it did to me. You continue to keep up your awesome work and I already know your next story is gonna be a great one. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Apr 11, 2007, 06:38 AM	#6 (permalink)
xxoxx Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: 無くなった Posts: 353 Thanks: 3 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 3,506	Re: My True Feelings Life is full of magic and miracles… Something wonderful happening every minute. A life being saved. A baby being born. Moments of greed and anger hide these truths. Look for the day you are happy. Hold that moment… Because it is yours. Treasure the days that you have a smile. Remember the ones that gave you that treasure. Think of the one you love; the one that stands by you… That takes your steps with you. You are never alone! Everyone has a miracle… Just so happens… You are mine. cute and nice ....good job keep upp ... __________________ Just Try It
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