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    My True Feelings

    I walk this path alone there's
    no one to be here with as my anger
    starts to build i think of you then i scream,
    HOW AM I SUPOSED TO BE THE SAME WITHOUT
    YOU!!! i walk on as my memories feel me with pain.

    My heart rages every time i see you with him
    i ball my hands up out fear for hurting him knowing
    that he has you. i so badly want you back as i believe
    that nothing will ever change between us i scream again
    WHY MUST MY HEART HAVE HATE WHEN I WANT LOVE?
    THERE NOTHING I WANT MORE THAN HAVING YOU!!!.

    I stand there with a tear not the kind that's sad
    but the kind that makes you wonder why life
    is so damned cruel ,i picture you in my head as i get
    angrier at him wanting his heart ripped from his still
    breathing chest as i watch you run to me.

    Life what the hell is it like this i want you here
    but it won't happen because he has your heart .
    i just feel so torn apart for you, knowing you are
    with him when it should be me.

    I am sincere with my feelings for you that
    will be always true because of my love for you
    as i near the end of my path my thoughts of you
    go but my anger will stay as i live on with hate.

    this poem is about frustrations on love and how
    it makes some guy's feel since girls really dont feel this
    way as there too open most of them anyway,but this poem
    is from my point of view a guy.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My True Feelings

    Wow. That was...that was very heartfelt. I can tell how this makes you feel and it's good that you let it out in poetry because your poems are so good. This was very nice with expressing your feelings, which is what poetry is all about. I can't wait to read more.

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    Re: My True Feelings

    that was a very sweet poem. It had all the right emotions to touch your heart which is what it did to me. You continue to keep up your awesome work and I already know your next story is gonna be a great one.
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    Re: My True Feelings

    This poem is filled with so much feelings into it. this poem lets the reader picture out your true feelings. this poem also shows the reality of a lost love, the hurts and pains. i liked your set of wordings. But you have to work on the capitalizations and some punctuations. but all in all , Great job on this!!!

    WHY MUST MY HEART HAVE HATE WHEN I WANT LOVE?
    >this line touched me the most.

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    Re: My True Feelings

    Wow

    WHY MUST MY HEART HAVE HATE WHEN I WANT LOVE?
    THERE NOTHING I WANT MORE THAN HAVING YOU!!!.
    This one rocks so hard i love it i love the emotions in it.
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    Re: My True Feelings

    Life is full of magic and miracles…

    Something wonderful happening every minute.
    A life being saved.
    A baby being born.

    Moments of greed and anger hide these truths.

    Look for the day you are happy.
    Hold that moment…
    Because it is yours.

    Treasure the days that you have a smile.
    Remember the ones that gave you that treasure.

    Think of the one you love; the one that stands by you…
    That takes your steps with you.

    You are never alone!

    Everyone has a miracle…
    Just so happens…
    You are mine.

    cute and nice ....good job keep upp ...

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