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    My unwavering love

    plz be kind to me i never show my poems to people before and there a bit unorganized i just write with the flow of my emotions.

    Im far from you my love distance may seperate us for now
    Our hearts can never be torn asunder by time or distance
    Our love is like a impregnable wall unable to be broken down
    We may have no contact now
    My heart mourns the loss of your voice
    My eyes shed tears of sadness
    But i do know this my love we will be together one day
    Our love connecting us together until that time
    My heart,soul, and body think of you also dreaming of your kisses and touch in the future
    My mind dreams of our life together while dreaming of our future child.

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    Re: My unwavering love

    I'm not going to critize your poem, because it is very good! The emotions of love are awesome! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more of your work!

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    Re: My unwavering love

    I find it some what inspirational, and i feel as if i should you my condolences. Good poem.

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    Re: My unwavering love

    That is a nice poem. Ive never writen a poem. Id probly suck.
    I sleep in a cardboard coffin

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    Re: My unwavering love

    Very nice poem. I'm very impressed. Keep it up. I not good at poems either.

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