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    My way to heaven

    As i go to the vast of the line, of the mind
    music, air, feathers and light of hope
    start falling over my mind
    i feel a releaf over my sins
    over my cold blacked heart
    evrything cleared up in my mind
    with happines and joy through the time
    i go to the gates of heaven
    for eternal life in heaven
    wings have growed in my back
    a circular light came and sealed my sins
    but i still feeled like i din't belong here just yet
    as i though that the tunes stoped and became
    silenced as a sign of the meaning of life
    but i made it to the gated and the open
    with a light that alas cleared my mind from
    negative forces for eternal life and time
    there was a chruch full of angels singing
    '' there all ways the meaning to love''
    and organ playd heaven tunes as a i walked
    to the altar were a tall man stand
    it was a purificacion cult
    i closed my eye's and waited for the list of sins
    as i had none.. as they will become one
    '' my last sin''



    perdoname michelle!

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    it sounds so strong. i like it. keep it up! =)
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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