My way to heaven

*Baal* · Oct 02, 2006, 06:44 PM

As i go to the vast of the line, of the mind
music, air, feathers and light of hope
start falling over my mind
i feel a releaf over my sins
over my cold blacked heart
evrything cleared up in my mind
with happines and joy through the time
i go to the gates of heaven
for eternal life in heaven
wings have growed in my back
a circular light came and sealed my sins
but i still feeled like i din't belong here just yet
as i though that the tunes stoped and became
silenced as a sign of the meaning of life
but i made it to the gated and the open
with a light that alas cleared my mind from
negative forces for eternal life and time
there was a chruch full of angels singing
'' there all ways the meaning to love''
and organ playd heaven tunes as a i walked
to the altar were a tall man stand
it was a purificacion cult
i closed my eye's and waited for the list of sins
as i had none.. as they will become one
'' my last sin''

For3v3r_Lost · Oct 02, 2006, 06:46 PM

it sounds so strong. i like it. keep it up! =)

Oct 02, 2006, 06:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 409	My way to heaven As i go to the vast of the line, of the mind music, air, feathers and light of hope start falling over my mind i feel a releaf over my sins over my cold blacked heart evrything cleared up in my mind with happines and joy through the time i go to the gates of heaven for eternal life in heaven wings have growed in my back a circular light came and sealed my sins but i still feeled like i din't belong here just yet as i though that the tunes stoped and became silenced as a sign of the meaning of life but i made it to the gated and the open with a light that alas cleared my mind from negative forces for eternal life and time there was a chruch full of angels singing '' there all ways the meaning to love'' and organ playd heaven tunes as a i walked to the altar were a tall man stand it was a purificacion cult i closed my eye's and waited for the list of sins as i had none.. as they will become one '' my last sin'' __________________ perdoname michelle!
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For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 410	it sounds so strong. i like it. keep it up! =) __________________ .:\|Myspace Profile\|.:.\|My Forum\|.:.\|My AO Gallery\|.:.\|My December\|:. "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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