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    My Will (kinda long)

    My Will

    Tears of blood,
    flowing pain.
    This broken mind,
    living in vain.

    My wounds are deep,
    to deep to heal.
    My heart in pieces,
    could this be real?

    It's easier to run,
    so no one can see.
    This broken girl,
    who looks like me.

    The visions of death,
    burned in my mind.
    The feeling of pain,
    is all to kind.

    You let me believe that I could trust you,
    I was living a lie.
    You said you wouldn't hurt me,
    and now you die.

    This blade in your heart,
    do you feel my pain?
    Your blood covers me,
    becoming a stain.

    You thought you won,
    now do you see?
    The future you had,
    is not to be.

    You stole my happiness,
    breaking my heart.
    You stole my innocence,
    and I ripped you apart.

    Just one more thing,
    before you go.
    Just one last thing,
    I thought you should know.

    You underestimated one thing,
    the thing with me still.
    The thing you weren't able to break,
    was my very will.

    Kinda sad, yet kinda not. Tell me what you think. All critizisms are welcome.

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    Re: My Will (kinda long)

    Is this your first poem you posted. Cause if it is your amazing!!! It seems like a very sad poem but I love any type of emotional poems! Hope to see more in the future!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My Will (kinda long)

    Hehe, thank you. It is my first poem, and yes I will be posting more in the near future.

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    Re: My Will (kinda long)

    Quote Originally Posted by Nekomata View Post
    Hehe, thank you. It is my first poem, and yes I will be posting more in the near future.
    Yeah! I'm very great to hear that! I know more people will like your poems just like me! So two thumbs up!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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