Thread: My Will (kinda long)

My Will

Tears of blood,
flowing pain.
This broken mind,
living in vain.

My wounds are deep,
to deep to heal.
My heart in pieces,
could this be real?

It's easier to run,
so no one can see.
This broken girl,
who looks like me.

The visions of death,
burned in my mind.
The feeling of pain,
is all to kind.

You let me believe that I could trust you,
I was living a lie.
You said you wouldn't hurt me,
and now you die.

This blade in your heart,
do you feel my pain?
Your blood covers me,
becoming a stain.

You thought you won,
now do you see?
The future you had,
is not to be.

You stole my happiness,
breaking my heart.
You stole my innocence,
and I ripped you apart.

Just one more thing,
before you go.
Just one last thing,
I thought you should know.

You underestimated one thing,
the thing with me still.
The thing you weren't able to break,
was my very will.

Kinda sad, yet kinda not. Tell me what you think. All critizisms are welcome.