my wish

so sick of their voices
and hating their excuses

i have seen where it grows
and where it flows

why are you so keen
on someone so mean

like me

i like to see
the ocean and sea

and talk all day
in my own way

and mostly love
your tales

i love
to see you as my love

why
can't i

have my own
one and only

i don't know the reason
for this act of treason

as i walk through the black
with everything i lack

i'm lost
through her affection
and through my addiction

when the end came near
i realized how much she's dear

i love her
and wish to hold her
in the nights
till the rise of the suns' lights

i am not ready to fade
because i don't want to tell her too late

how much that i love her
and belong to her

i wish to tell you
i love you
and i wish to always to be with you

thats the truest
and dearest wish
that i wish to come true

as i walk through the black
with everything i {lake}

might wanna fix that, but otherwise pretty good

Nice poem powerxxx, keep it up.

You know, your poetry seems boring if you keep writing it in the same structure. Try something different with the way you want to present the poem.