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Jun 04, 2007, 03:33 PM
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  1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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 Credits: 59,502 | My world 2 My world 2... It's blindingly dark now. Walking in here would be like a mime with no hands. Screeches of bats can be heard. Everything is so silent. So quiet that everything can be heard clearly. You will feel like you are watched in here, though there is no one around. It's so cold. It is so cold that hell would freeze in here. It rains frequently here. Rain of droplets of ice and snow. Red Ice and green snow. The ice is sharp it could stab u as it falls.. The snow comes down like a big blanket... What kind of a world is this? Where am i? Why am i here? I kept on asking myself this question. No answer so far... Until one day... I took my hands and i can see them. I can see my surrounding clearly. I can hear many sounds... The atmosphere becomes warm. Rivers and lakes starts to melt. There are no more ice and snow rain. Rain is still there but this time it's water. Rainbow casts itself out as the rain stops. The first time i see one here. Look far towards the hills, near my heart, I can see you...standing there smiling to me... Thank you...all and especially you |
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Jun 05, 2007, 02:09 AM
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| Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: My world 2 This is... strange and scary again, but the ending is nice, so... I like it. You've done a great work describing that world of ice and snow and cold (have you seen snow anyways though?)  A nice poem indeed, the ending makes it just great... Luck to you and her |
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Jun 05, 2007, 07:09 AM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: My world 2 Lol ^^ ty... i think i need more than luck this time xD oh well.. ^^ be writing more...  |
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Jun 07, 2007, 03:13 AM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: My world 2 xD ^^ ty... i don't think u can't do better than mine...i have'nt seen urs yet.. ahh...i think this poems is too much of a resemblance with my first 1... -.- hmm... |
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Jun 07, 2007, 04:59 AM
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 Otaku  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play
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Credits: 10,702 | Re: My world 2 amazing i love it (>_< sry 4 the late reply) amazing i love the ending when u see the person u love standing write there. simply amazing .good job 
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Jun 07, 2007, 06:28 AM
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: My world 2 ^^ lol it's ok... thank you ^^ i wrote another yesterday... take a look ^^ |
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