Although your poem didn't have the traditional rhyme scheme or set number of lines per stanzas, I was very moved the words of regret that you had written. The content is absolutely touching. Good job.![]()
When I left you I thought I could find someone better,
but I was wrong.
Leaving you was the biggest mistake I've made.
When I realized my mistakes, I told myself
that I could get over you so easily,
that i was just guilty
of leaving you without any
words of goodbye. But then again, I was so wrong
.... I'm really missing you.
Now I'm here in a dark room, sitting all by myself;
cold,lonely and in despair.. and no one to run to..
now that you're not here,
I now then realize how much you mean to me,
how much I love you, how much i wanted you here by my side.
But I can't turn back time, but if I have a chance to
turn it back I WOULD CHOOSE THOSE TIMES THAT WE WERE TOGETHER. HAPPY AND INSEPARABLE.
But now all i can do is reminisce those times when we were
in each others arm.
the future is no where my dream is
Although your poem didn't have the traditional rhyme scheme or set number of lines per stanzas, I was very moved the words of regret that you had written. The content is absolutely touching. Good job.![]()
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