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    "My wrong Decisions"

    When I left you I thought I could find someone better,
    but I was wrong.
    Leaving you was the biggest mistake I've made.

    When I realized my mistakes, I told myself
    that I could get over you so easily,
    that i was just guilty
    of leaving you without any
    words of goodbye. But then again, I was so wrong
    .... I'm really missing you.

    Now I'm here in a dark room, sitting all by myself;
    cold,lonely and in despair.. and no one to run to..

    now that you're not here,
    I now then realize how much you mean to me,
    how much I love you, how much i wanted you here by my side.

    But I can't turn back time, but if I have a chance to
    turn it back I WOULD CHOOSE THOSE TIMES THAT WE WERE TOGETHER. HAPPY AND INSEPARABLE.

    But now all i can do is reminisce those times when we were
    in each others arm.
    the future is no where my dream is<div style=text-align: center;>

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    Re: "My wrong Decisions"

    Although your poem didn't have the traditional rhyme scheme or set number of lines per stanzas, I was very moved the words of regret that you had written. The content is absolutely touching. Good job.

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    Re: "My wrong Decisions"

    i really didn't use that style, cause it's too traditional and common.
    i just tried a different kind of writing a poem.
    the future is no where my dream is<div style=text-align: center;>
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