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    Myself

    This poem is dedicated to my Aunt Brenda, by God's mercy; may she rest in peace:

    I feel so empty
    Like nothing's inside me
    I feel so cold
    I feel so alone

    I feel the void sucking from me
    every precious breath
    Pushing down, reaching deep
    like a dagger in my chest

    I wonder why I feel this way?
    Am I just punishing myself?
    I know I should just push away
    And look to somewhere else

    But it's so hard to feel or think
    Yet I still keep on trying
    For it won't be over in a blink
    I can't stay on the ground, lying

    To do that is to admit defeat
    And I am not a quitter
    I know this can be beat
    And that all things will get better

    I can't control Destiny
    But Fate is my task
    The wind is blowing westerly
    But I steer the Mast

    The Ocean may be deep and vast
    Stormy rains may pound and pelt
    Yet I'll make it Home safe and fast
    As long as I believe in Myself.

    Sanity doesn't exist, it's just an excuse cooked up by crazy people to justify their actions. My myspace page: www.myspace.com/joemage

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    Re: Myself

    this perfectly explains what it feels like to fight through something. and, even when things get discouraging... you still keep hope.
    Sometimes you dont even know what the hope is for... its just hope... and its all you got.
    Anyway, thats wht I got from it.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Well, I tried ta write a poem inna way so that each person that reads it can interpret what they want from it. Being an artist, I have a tendency ta do that.

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    Well then, you were successful. You deffinately have a gift. Keep it up!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Myself

    Rhyming!!!!!!!

    think
    trying
    blink
    lying
    Vocabulary!!!!

    westerly
    mast
    void
    blink
    Imagery!!!!!

    The Ocean may be deep and vast
    Stormy rains may pound and pelt
    It was simply fun to read, though touching as it was intended, none the less for someone you seem to care for.

    I hope to see an entry from you in the "Poem Of The Month"
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    Re: Myself

    Thanks, evry1, when my aunt passed away I couldn' bring myself ta draw or write for nearly 2 months. Then one day, I sat down and wrote this poem, rememberin' my aunt's struggle wit cancer and my own struggle wit that disease. I was thinkin' 'bout how I could've survived and she did not. This poem allowed me ta gain a little insight inta myself. I hope that it does the same for others that read it.

    Sanity doesn't exist, it's just an excuse cooked up by crazy people to justify their actions. My myspace page: www.myspace.com/joemage

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