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    Myspace Whore

    Foundations and powders.
    Cover up blemishes, clog up my pores.
    Establish the perfect background.
    Shower curtains and bathroom doors.
    Elongated arm.
    I've got the perfect angle for sure.
    Careful!
    Don't reveal
    Your flaws.
    Oath of a Myspace Whore.

    Add me to your friends...
    ...Perhaps we could strike up a good rapport.
    Comment on my pictures...
    ...Fantasize about doing more.
    Facebook has nothing on you.
    Why does everyone go there for?
    I am faithful
    Loyal
    and True.
    I am a Myspace whore.

    [email protected]
    ...You know you want to explore....
    Creating your profile playlist.
    It's so entertaining, has so much allure.
    Are you a member of every app?
    Comments and bulletins gallore?
    Too bad
    Real life's
    A BORE!
    Pity the Myspace Whore.
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    Re: Myspace Whore

    true true about that poem!............ and the sad thing is... I had a myspacewhore too!

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    Re: Myspace Whore

    you had a myspace whore? does that mean you dated one? I heard they're great at anything that involves them being looked down at (like in one of them myspace camera angles.)
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    Re: Myspace Whore

    Wow.. I wonder how you got inspired with this one... Man.. another powerful poem with striking message..

    The flow is great! I just wish mine would get better >.< Hmm...i really need to do more poems The message is very clear ^^ Pity the myspace whore.. a group of people who crave for attention...i think i was one of them.. too bad im a guy! xD but i think my sisters and a cousin is one of them already o.O

    By the way.. what was the reason for you to write a poem about this?

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    Re: Myspace Whore

    Too bad you're a guy?! Guys can TOTALY be myspace whores!

    But RayMe you are one of the strongest writers on AO! Give yourself more credit. You are in a selected handful of people whos poetry I am sure to frequent. Everybody else just has to pray they get lucky :P . You have certainly been a source of inspiration to me.

    What inspired this poem... I have been losing weight. I have lost 100 pounds so far , and am STILL quite overweight. (so that should give you an idea of how big I was. Well, I never liked to see myself. Not in the mirror, let alone in pictures. and just recently I have decided to branch out a little. Taking photos for myspace was sort of monumental for me. Then I started to check and see if I got comments on my photos. And I was\am beside myself with this sudden craving for attention. Its fun, in a sadly pathetic kind of way. So... I wrote about it.

    Mind you, there are people WAY worse than me. People who define more of the WHORE aspect of "myspace whore". That is always a sad situation.
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    Re: Myspace Whore

    I greatly enjoy your poems.
    You do quite a nice job.
    The topics are always interesting and well selected.
    I like the use of the email as transition it's creative. It's a good abstract line that connects to your over all concept.

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    Re: Myspace Whore

    that poem was actually really good.i expected this to be posts like so yeah.
    but excelent poem.wut the heck you should make it a songno lie

    ..."dont pretend to know me ... when i dont even know myself..."

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