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    N/a

    Every time I hear you speak
    Words so soft, cunning, and meek
    My heart skips beats trying to listen
    As I see your eyes start to glisten

    These feelings so strange
    Mind wanders deranged
    Forgetting the past
    Heart pounding so fast

    Trying to ignore this thought
    But cannot hide what is sought
    My mind unaware
    It could not prepare

    would one of you help me finish this one?

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: N/a

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragons2801 View Post
    Every time I hear you speak
    Words so soft, cunning, and meek
    My heart skips beats trying to listen
    As I see your eyes start to glisten

    These feelings so strange
    Mind wanders deranged
    Forgetting the past
    Heart pounding so fast

    Trying to ignore this thought
    But cannot hide what is sought
    My mind unaware
    It could not prepare

    would one of you help me finish this one?
    for these emotions that hit
    in my chest a spark had lit
    you are all I see
    but it couldn't be

    haha, thats all i got for now

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    Re: N/a

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragons2801 View Post
    Every time I hear you speak
    Words so soft, cunning, and meek
    My heart skips beats trying to listen
    As I see your eyes start to glisten

    These feelings so strange
    Mind wanders deranged
    Forgetting the past
    Heart pounding so fast

    Trying to ignore this thought
    But cannot hide what is sought
    My mind unaware
    It could not prepare

    would one of you help me finish this one?
    Quote Originally Posted by Sukai View Post
    For these emotions that hit
    In my chest a spark had lit
    You are all I see
    But it couldn't be

    haha, thats all i got for now

    I ache every time i see you
    Always starting thees emotions anew
    Pain so intense it makes me sweat
    Thinking about you till past the sunset

    hows that sound?
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    Re: N/a

    these sound great. it is great to know that you guys are able to make these better.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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