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    n.n

    Freedoms all around dancing in our little song
    Making us party long
    We're both single yet
    I love you, you love me making us glad we met
    I want you, you want me
    I hope thats true if you can see
    I kiss you, you kiss me
    Meaning we were ment to be
    I want you in my arms
    So here won't be any harms
    I want to hold your hand
    Since this would always be our land
    I want to see your smile
    Since I love that in a while
    Please stay with me
    Cause you make me feel free
    Your heart is my heart
    Since I always loved you from the start
    Your the one who could complete me
    I hope that could always be
    All this time I want to ask you if it's fine
    Can I be yours so you could be mine

    Hope you like it!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: n.n

    its very good though its cheerful my main take is the darker side of life in mine but its a very good representation of that genre of poetic expression


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    Quote Originally Posted by Bio-link View Post
    its very good though its cheerful my main take is the darker side of life in mine but its a very good representation of that genre of poetic expression
    True True! And thank you for your comment really so YEAH!!!!! I really thank you!
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    Re: n.n

    Thats a very cute and romantic poem. u must put your heart into it!^^ Good poem and i hope to see more.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AngelFlow View Post
    Thats a very cute and romantic poem. u must put your heart into it!^^ Good poem and i hope to see more.
    Yeah!!!!! Someone else likes it so YEAH!!!!! Thank you for the comment! I really thank you!! so YEAH!!!!
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    Re: n.n

    Well that was very nice poem and It's romantic one I love read it ..
    nice work ..keep it up....KuwiRules145..^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    Well that was very nice poem and It's romantic one I love read it ..
    nice work ..keep it up....KuwiRules145..^^
    Yeah then! I thank you for your comment! I really thank you!!!!! So thank you!
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