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    The Name of No-Name

    The Name of No-Name: By Zyta

    Lingering on the side of the roadway, I wait,
    Loitering longer day by day for a glimpse of her.
    When lo, she appears as the hand moves to eight
    And nervously I look away, and begin to walk on either
    Side of her—the butterflies gathering in the pit of my belly.
    If only I knew her name, to speak out a loud
    When I am alone, the girl with short hair of sand.
    Her innocence pours off her body in the way that rainy
    Days are often pierced with beams of sun without sound.
    She turns to me with a smile sent from Heaven I the End.
    Suddenly she breaks from our paired path without warning
    And walks away without knowing the extent that I tame
    These feelings of hopefully pandemonium. Being that thing
    I yearn for above all else: Just once to call out her Name.

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    Re: The Name of No-Name

    Cool and very lovely poem...
    I just imagined myself when I ought to remember how I met my GF for the very first time.
    I like this poem much!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: The Name of No-Name

    Very touching and sad poem. It reminds me of all the times I should have confessed my love but didn't.

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    Thanks guys. I'm just going to assume you're both dudes for the sake of my thanking.

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    Re: The Name of No-Name

    That was really good, creative, and the length was just right. Like some poems are too long or too short, this one was just right, says GoldieLocks. Reminds me alot of how this stalker I used to have, must have felt about me. Now I think to myself, maybe I should have given him more attention, or dropped something of mine so he could keep it to remember me by.

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    Re: The Name of No-Name

    Oh wow thats a really heartfelt poem. I really like it.
    The world is full of fear and despair, that is is why we must find the light in this pit of darkness.


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    Re: The Name of No-Name

    I like this poem it really kinda how i felt when i met my gf for the first couple month i keep try to talk to her but couldn't even find the words to say to her then she walked up to me and we started talking and now we are going out and in a 2 or 3 month are going to be living together. If i had to thank someone for us being together i would thank her because if it wasn't for her we wouldn't have ever gone out. I'm so glad that she talk to me that day because now she is be my side.
    This is a good poem Zyta great job on it.

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