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    nameless stranger

    He must've been a stranger..
    When they saw her come to the hospital she
    was alone..

    She might've forgotton about him..Didn't tell
    him she had a baby...
    was going to give her away for adoption..

    The faceless woman, i could care less about
    until later in my life..
    But i want to know the nameless stranger..

    I want to know..did he see her? sign
    the papers...the one who signed my life
    away to someone else.. who could take care of me?
    so she wouldn't have to...

    His thoughts, what were they? did he love me?
    did he care about me? or was he as HEARTLESS as the woman..
    tossed me aside like SHE did?...

    I doubt it..
    well at least i keep saying that
    when i think about him...
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen

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    Re: nameless stranger

    now this is what i call a sad poem*cryes*you've made me cry
    you really did express your feelings in this poem

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    Re: nameless stranger

    thank you^^ but dont cry! please, please please dont cry "/ i dont like making people cry"/

    i usually express my feelings better in writing then i do actually talking to people about them lol

    thank you for reading it^^
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    Re: nameless stranger

    Nice... really good... I like it... And it was just very interesting to find out your story... Just because I've never knew anyone adopted... This was a very interesting experience to put myself in your place... Nice...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: nameless stranger

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Nice... really good... I like it... And it was just very interesting to find out your story... Just because I've never knew anyone adopted... This was a very interesting experience to put myself in your place... Nice...
    why thank you lasura^^ i appreciate your comment
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