A Namless love poem

She was there and
I never notice her.
I didnt see her as loving me.
I was fool to not notice.
She was beauitful in her own way.

Elegant as she was,
Life seem to flood into me, the sunshine
Is warm on my face and we were
Eccentric in our own little ways.

But we loved each other for it.
We were in friends but
She made the move and
Told me about it.
I was shocked yet happy
That I could actually love someone.

I was happy to be by her side and
Support her but to love her was
Something else, yet I tried.
Hair flowed like silk and
Her skin was radiant.
She was my image of perfection.
Our love would stand against time
And last till the world crumble into the abyss.

Sorri ppl struggling to come with a name with this poem. Hope u enjoy it.

I think it was kinda good not perfect but good :)

lol the peom didn't rhyme, but it was good.

i wonder who is tis poem dedicated to eh? :D :D :D
i like it.

Nice poem Blade, you rock :D

I no ppl, it's good, but i think tht it's not of the best. I dnt really go for rythming

wat do i hear? poems nt rhymin? i seem to remember me sayin the same thing, n u with the rest of others told me tat POEMS DOES NOT NEED TO RHYME.

I'm speechless, i can feel this poem, it's so much like what i'm going through, only i havn't told her yet...... that will take time..... <sigh>