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    A Namless love poem

    She was there and
    I never notice her.
    I didnt see her as loving me.
    I was fool to not notice.
    She was beauitful in her own way.

    Elegant as she was,
    Life seem to flood into me, the sunshine
    Is warm on my face and we were
    Eccentric in our own little ways.

    But we loved each other for it.
    We were in friends but
    She made the move and
    Told me about it.
    I was shocked yet happy
    That I could actually love someone.

    I was happy to be by her side and
    Support her but to love her was
    Something else, yet I tried.
    Hair flowed like silk and
    Her skin was radiant.
    She was my image of perfection.
    Our love would stand against time
    And last till the world crumble into the abyss.

    Sorri ppl struggling to come with a name with this poem. Hope u enjoy it.

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    Re: A Namless love poem

    I think it was kinda good not perfect but good

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    Re: A Namless love poem

    lol the peom didn't rhyme, but it was good.

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    Re: A Namless love poem

    i wonder who is tis poem dedicated to eh?
    i like it.

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    Re: A Namless love poem

    Nice poem Blade, you rock

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    Re: A Namless love poem

    I no ppl, it's good, but i think tht it's not of the best. I dnt really go for rythming

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    Re: A Namless love poem

    wat do i hear? poems nt rhymin? i seem to remember me sayin the same thing, n u with the rest of others told me tat POEMS DOES NOT NEED TO RHYME.

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    Re: A Namless love poem

    I'm speechless, i can feel this poem, it's so much like what i'm going through, only i havn't told her yet...... that will take time..... <sigh>
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