A Namless love poem

*Blade X* · Apr 15, 2006, 08:27 AM

She was there and
I never notice her.
I didnt see her as loving me.
I was fool to not notice.
She was beauitful in her own way.

Elegant as she was,
Life seem to flood into me, the sunshine
Is warm on my face and we were
Eccentric in our own little ways.

But we loved each other for it.
We were in friends but
She made the move and
Told me about it.
I was shocked yet happy
That I could actually love someone.

I was happy to be by her side and
Support her but to love her was
Something else, yet I tried.
Hair flowed like silk and
Her skin was radiant.
She was my image of perfection.
Our love would stand against time
And last till the world crumble into the abyss.

Sorri ppl struggling to come with a name with this poem. Hope u enjoy it.

sora the king of dreams · Apr 15, 2006, 08:45 AM

I think it was kinda good not perfect but good

*ketaro* · Apr 15, 2006, 05:53 PM

lol the peom didn't rhyme, but it was good.

elie26 · Apr 15, 2006, 11:59 PM

i wonder who is tis poem dedicated to eh?

i like it.

*Rave_Grip* · Apr 16, 2006, 12:03 AM

Nice poem Blade, you rock

*Blade X* · Apr 16, 2006, 12:14 AM

I no ppl, it's good, but i think tht it's not of the best. I dnt really go for rythming

elie26 · Apr 16, 2006, 12:37 AM

wat do i hear? poems nt rhymin? i seem to remember me sayin the same thing, n u with the rest of others told me tat POEMS DOES NOT NEED TO RHYME.

B1ad3_k1n6 · Apr 17, 2006, 05:22 PM

I'm speechless, i can feel this poem, it's so much like what i'm going through, only i havn't told her yet...... that will take time..... <sigh>

Malloc-X · Apr 17, 2006, 05:30 PM

i really love love poems do u have any more? i think it was good

*Blade X* · Apr 18, 2006, 12:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Malloc-X

i really love love poems do u have any more? i think it was good

yea jus check my profile n click on all thread started by me and find ur way to my poems.

*Mr. K* · Apr 19, 2006, 12:50 AM

ummm... I wonder how you were able to write this. I have a feeling it happened. Anyway. I like you stuff. So I'm going to put my to say in.

Great Poem.

Apr 15, 2006, 08:27 AM	#1 (permalink)
Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,464	A Namless love poem She was there and I never notice her. I didnt see her as loving me. I was fool to not notice. She was beauitful in her own way. Elegant as she was, Life seem to flood into me, the sunshine Is warm on my face and we were Eccentric in our own little ways. But we loved each other for it. We were in friends but She made the move and Told me about it. I was shocked yet happy That I could actually love someone. I was happy to be by her side and Support her but to love her was Something else, yet I tried. Hair flowed like silk and Her skin was radiant. She was my image of perfection. Our love would stand against time And last till the world crumble into the abyss. Sorri ppl struggling to come with a name with this poem. Hope u enjoy it. __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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sora the king of dreams Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends Posts: 419 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 458	Re: A Namless love poem I think it was kinda good not perfect but good __________________ I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am. A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao. http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,464	Re: A Namless love poem I no ppl, it's good, but i think tht it's not of the best. I dnt really go for rythming __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,151	Re: A Namless love poem wat do i hear? poems nt rhymin? i seem to remember me sayin the same thing, n u with the rest of others told me tat POEMS DOES NOT NEED TO RHYME. __________________
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B1ad3_k1n6 Newbie Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 23 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 50	Re: A Namless love poem I'm speechless, i can feel this poem, it's so much like what i'm going through, only i havn't told her yet...... that will take time..... <sigh> __________________ The maximum size for an image in your signature is 450x110 pixels, please resize your image. i keep on thinking it's not good bye, i keep on thinking it's our time to fly FRIENDS FOREVER!!
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Malloc-X Newbie Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 214	Re: A Namless love poem i really love love poems do u have any more? i think it was good __________________
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,269 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 3,586	Re: A Namless love poem ummm... I wonder how you were able to write this. I have a feeling it happened. Anyway. I like you stuff. So I'm going to put my to say in. Great Poem. __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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