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    Namonaki (nameless)

    This is to Yami Bakura ^-^ my fav anime character and how his village was sacrificed to make the seven millenium items and why he's such a nemesis of Yugi
    here goes (hope its good ^-^)

    Under the shameful cover
    of the nefarious night
    the solemn slayers arrived ,
    unhidden from my sight

    In the name of the king
    they spilt innocent blood
    that of a thousand villagers ,
    enough, the Nile to flood

    In the name of the king ,mercilessly
    they tramped on my childhood
    Preying upon my mind night and day
    and tall before me , my awakened fears stood

    Tortured by what I saw
    and left all alone was I
    and my fears became stronger
    as days passed by

    Myself crawled in a shell ,
    where buried I lay in a valley of the dead
    Where my traumatized soul
    shivered ,at every stranger's tread

    Abandoned once more was I
    when my fears left me
    And as sorrow accumulated
    I exhaled tears that noone could see

    My sorrow beside me in my well ,
    itself did bury
    and forgotten it too was ,
    as I was conquered by fury

    When my intense fury shook my soul
    and ate away my conscience
    My inner passionate commitement
    to the downfall of the king did rise

    Fallen from my path of wrongness
    and defeated Ive been more than thrice
    but Ive earnestly swore to avenge
    the undead and myself at any price

    So every time His Highness
    in what he thinks is rightful strikes me down
    I'll rise up stronger this time
    and make sure he's buried along his crown


    So watdo u think =S ?

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    Re: Namonaki (nameless)

    This is an amaising poem, showing many sides within ones entire being, how the actions of one man and his foolish deeds blinded by his own power to hert others.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: Namonaki (nameless)

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragons2801 View Post
    This is an amaising poem, showing many sides within ones entire being, how the actions of one man and his foolish deeds blinded by his own power to hert others.
    Thanks a lot =) ! glad you liked it ^^ That means a lot ^_^

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