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    Nation Divided

    Carrying hopes and dreams
    A man to office was sworn.
    For belief in his themes,
    And we are even more torn.

    As with many in high power
    Selfishness blooms
    When greed consumes.
    A good apple becomes sour.

    He grabbed our imagination.
    Promises of grand reform
    Absorbed by administration.
    He slowed to become the norm.

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    Re: Nation Divided

    wow, to be honest i could not write am poem that good. that poem has wonderful feeling. that is about obama correct?

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    Re: Nation Divided

    Quote Originally Posted by POOHEAD189 View Post
    wow, to be honest i could not write am poem that good. that poem has wonderful feeling. that is about obama correct?
    Yes, you would be correct. And thank you for the kind critisicm. It is good to see people can come to that conclusion with out being told. It lets me know I have done what I intended.

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    Re: Nation Divided

    Will sorry to say even though the poem is right how could you not see that comming if you listened to the things Obama said its not his fault its people like you who said he told me something different no he alwasy did things and said things that told he was going to do this.

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    Re: Nation Divided

    It is not my fault because I did not vote for him. Not my fault he is in office in anyway shape or form.

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    Re: Nation Divided

    Quote Originally Posted by beast View Post
    It is not my fault because I did not vote for him. Not my fault he is in office in anyway shape or form.
    I know im just saying that poem makes it sound like that and for the people who thought he was going to be the best president ever and then he turned out to be sucky its not his fault but theirs for voting for him and not even looking at what he said .

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