well gren that poem was good and everything i really enjoyed it well done and keep up the great work and hope to see you more
Natural
The sun stole the show,
and the moon threw her silvery sneer in your face.
Roses raised their bloody heads to mock you
but never once told a lie.
Snow fell and glittered in the grass
and dazzled us more than your parted lips.
Fires painted the sky in orange-gold and gray,
creating a masterpiece your body couldn't rival.
Raindrops like exquisite crystals
put the clarity of your skin to shame.
A breeze lit upon the cheek,
softer and sweeter than your delicate breath.
Robins dancing on the windowsill
drowned your whispers with a lighthearted tune.
The world blinked out of a dead eye--
beautiful and cold.
well gren that poem was good and everything i really enjoyed it well done and keep up the great work and hope to see you more
Kawaii! That was a good one! I loved it! Hope to see more of your work!
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