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    The sun stole the show,
    and the moon threw her silvery sneer in your face.

    Roses raised their bloody heads to mock you
    but never once told a lie.

    Snow fell and glittered in the grass
    and dazzled us more than your parted lips.

    Fires painted the sky in orange-gold and gray,
    creating a masterpiece your body couldn't rival.

    Raindrops like exquisite crystals
    put the clarity of your skin to shame.

    A breeze lit upon the cheek,
    softer and sweeter than your delicate breath.

    Robins dancing on the windowsill
    drowned your whispers with a lighthearted tune.

    The world blinked out of a dead eye--
    beautiful and cold.
    sig by Pyro Psycho

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    Re: Natural

    well gren that poem was good and everything i really enjoyed it well done and keep up the great work and hope to see you more

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    Re: Natural

    Kawaii! That was a good one! I loved it! Hope to see more of your work!

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