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Old Aug 09, 2007, 09:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Nature

Feel the grass between your toes
The wind dancing around you
See the tree sway in sync with the wind
As if nature dances to its own tune
From the birds in the trees
To the insects down below

Watch the water fall from the cliff
Making a miraculous rainbow
To make the background image
For the nature's dance

As you look farther up
We see the white clouds and sky
Clouds giving brief shade from the sun
Which brings this whole scene to life

Let us follow the dance of the wind
The sun will show the way
We shall find more of nature's shows
Come, take my hand
There is much more to see

Writer's Notes: Just felt like writing something. Though, I wish it was this nice over here what I tried to portray in the poem. Thanks for reading. Also, thanks to Lasura's poem "Enjoy the moment." Gave me inspiration to make this one. I tried not to make it too similar. =/
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Old Aug 09, 2007, 09:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Nature

Aaaaahhhhh..........

Sometimes you want to listen to your regular tunes. And other times you wanna pop in something relaxing. Something you can just vibe to. A little something to provide atmosphere. My mom likes to listen to "sounds of the rainforrest"... Thats what this poem reminded me of.

Gee, Im all relaxed, maybe I'll get some sleep tonight...
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Re: Nature

@.@ nice... I find this much better than mine... and I too feel so relaxed now, I could imagine all that you described- see it before my eyes and I just felt like lying down in the grass and falling asleep again... Nice work!

And I didn't find it very alike mine. Maybe only the last stranza reminded me of what I wrote... ^^ I'm glad to hear my poem inspired you to write this piece of art... A very nice work, I'll be waiting forward for more..
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I've very glad this poem made both of you relaxed. I tried to make it very visual and peaceful as I could. *sigh* Heh, I wish the heat would cool down and be somewhat like that here.
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