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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,484 | Nature Feel the grass between your toes The wind dancing around you See the tree sway in sync with the wind As if nature dances to its own tune From the birds in the trees To the insects down below Watch the water fall from the cliff Making a miraculous rainbow To make the background image For the nature's dance As you look farther up We see the white clouds and sky Clouds giving brief shade from the sun Which brings this whole scene to life Let us follow the dance of the wind The sun will show the way We shall find more of nature's shows Come, take my hand There is much more to see Writer's Notes: Just felt like writing something. Though, I wish it was this nice over here what I tried to portray in the poem. Thanks for reading. Also, thanks to Lasura's poem "Enjoy the moment." Gave me inspiration to make this one. I tried not to make it too similar. =/
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,011 | Re: Nature Aaaaahhhhh.......... Sometimes you want to listen to your regular tunes. And other times you wanna pop in something relaxing. Something you can just vibe to. A little something to provide atmosphere. My mom likes to listen to "sounds of the rainforrest"... Thats what this poem reminded me of. Gee, Im all relaxed, maybe I'll get some sleep tonight... |
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![]() Credits: 49,375 | Re: Nature @.@ nice... I find this much better than mine... and I too feel so relaxed now, I could imagine all that you described- see it before my eyes and I just felt like lying down in the grass and falling asleep again... Nice work! And I didn't find it very alike mine. Maybe only the last stranza reminded me of what I wrote... ^^ I'm glad to hear my poem inspired you to write this piece of art... A very nice work, I'll be waiting forward for more.. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,484 | Re: Nature I've very glad this poem made both of you relaxed. I tried to make it very visual and peaceful as I could. *sigh* Heh, I wish the heat would cool down and be somewhat like that here.
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