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    Nature

    Feel the grass between your toes
    The wind dancing around you
    See the tree sway in sync with the wind
    As if nature dances to its own tune
    From the birds in the trees
    To the insects down below

    Watch the water fall from the cliff
    Making a miraculous rainbow
    To make the background image
    For the nature's dance

    As you look farther up
    We see the white clouds and sky
    Clouds giving brief shade from the sun
    Which brings this whole scene to life

    Let us follow the dance of the wind
    The sun will show the way
    We shall find more of nature's shows
    Come, take my hand
    There is much more to see

    Writer's Notes: Just felt like writing something. Though, I wish it was this nice over here what I tried to portray in the poem. Thanks for reading. Also, thanks to Lasura's poem "Enjoy the moment." Gave me inspiration to make this one. I tried not to make it too similar. =/
    Last edited by Chaos105; Aug 09, 2007 at 11:01 AM.

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    Re: Nature

    Aaaaahhhhh..........

    Sometimes you want to listen to your regular tunes. And other times you wanna pop in something relaxing. Something you can just vibe to. A little something to provide atmosphere. My mom likes to listen to "sounds of the rainforrest"... Thats what this poem reminded me of.

    Gee, Im all relaxed, maybe I'll get some sleep tonight...
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Nature

    @.@ nice... I find this much better than mine... and I too feel so relaxed now, I could imagine all that you described- see it before my eyes and I just felt like lying down in the grass and falling asleep again... Nice work!

    And I didn't find it very alike mine. Maybe only the last stranza reminded me of what I wrote... ^^ I'm glad to hear my poem inspired you to write this piece of art... A very nice work, I'll be waiting forward for more..

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    Re: Nature

    I've very glad this poem made both of you relaxed. I tried to make it very visual and peaceful as I could. *sigh* Heh, I wish the heat would cool down and be somewhat like that here.

    They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."

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