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Newbie | Nature's Wrath High up in the treetops is a nest made with care But the couple were thinking “my gosh!” its too bare They ponder for minutes as ideas came to mind However they were often caught in a heavy bind While Sunlight penetrates through the dark forest floor Hell chomping Vines creep up and sprout from the core The cracked ground rumbles causing havoc to the nest Sturdy and balanced, the cradle is put to the test As molten lava gushes up through the narrow fissure Animals rush out from their habitats to seek a cure But the damage is too great and down comes the tree With no second to spare, the horrified lovers flee |
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Moving right along.... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,512 | Re: Nature's Wrath This poem felt very green and tree-huggerish... which is all good. It put a touch of drama in a situation most would never think of a dramatic... Tragic maybe... but not many people think about the FEELINGS in other living creatures. You actually perfected it... I was panicing with those birds when I read this.
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Newbie | Re: Nature's Wrath Quote:
hay i see you made alot of friends so whats up all be gone for 2days so see ya later | |
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