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    Nature's Wrath

    High up in the treetops is a nest made with care
    But the couple were thinking “my gosh!” its too bare
    They ponder for minutes as ideas came to mind
    However they were often caught in a heavy bind

    While Sunlight penetrates through the dark forest floor
    Hell chomping Vines creep up and sprout from the core
    The cracked ground rumbles causing havoc to the nest
    Sturdy and balanced, the cradle is put to the test

    As molten lava gushes up through the narrow fissure
    Animals rush out from their habitats to seek a cure
    But the damage is too great and down comes the tree
    With no second to spare, the horrified lovers flee

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    Re: Nature's Wrath

    This poem felt very green and tree-huggerish... which is all good. It put a touch of drama in a situation most would never think of a dramatic... Tragic maybe... but not many people think about the FEELINGS in other living creatures. You actually perfected it... I was panicing with those birds when I read this.
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    Re: Nature's Wrath

    Quote Originally Posted by Yippy123 View Post
    High up in the treetops is a nest made with care
    But the couple were thinking “my gosh!” its too bare
    They ponder for minutes as ideas came to mind
    However they were often caught in a heavy bind

    While Sunlight penetrates through the dark forest floor
    Hell chomping Vines creep up and sprout from the core
    The cracked ground rumbles causing havoc to the nest
    Sturdy and balanced, the cradle is put to the test

    As molten lava gushes up through the narrow fissure
    Animals rush out from their habitats to seek a cure
    But the damage is too great and down comes the tree
    With no second to spare, the horrified lovers flee


    hay i see you made alot of friends so whats up
    all be gone for 2days so see ya later

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