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    Need Help or Not?

    A becon in the dark , running into the arms of the
    nothing but something has to be there because
    all i do is feel the need to hold it tight and embrace
    the nothing thats so dark.

    Am i crazy or am i sane im not sure with all this pain
    but one thing is for sure , i hold onto to the dark ,
    that becon seems call for me in that dark place where
    i am so alone.

    All i see is that dark abyss as i grasp on to what
    i belive is real or am i just feeling things when i hold on
    to you. That becon that calls to me when its so cold
    and dark.

    If only i could know its you and not that numbing feeling
    that calls for me to bleed when i hold that blade that kisses
    me like a loving person , its so addicting its almost hard to
    resist that warmness flowing down my arm.

    I hope its you thats the becon i seek in that dark void that
    swallows me as i feel my way all around a world that seems
    to my reality yet that cant see me , then i die ..... please
    be the becon so i can stay alive and hold you once more.
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    this poem is about struggling in a world that is hopless
    hoping to see another day but always guessing if it will be
    there last, wanting to get out of the darkness can be hard
    but it can be done .

    it can be addicting being so alone not needing anyone
    while hoping someone does help , theres a lot of ways
    that darkness can affect you but only you can control
    what it does this poem is just one way.

    comments and suggestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Need Help or Not?

    Nice poem I'm sure alot of people have felt this way. It can be a lonely world sometimes without someone to love. Hope to see more of your poems soon.
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