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    Nerds

    have you ever felt
    a feeling of being separated
    a feeling of being an evil
    a feeling of being dead

    the day when everything is gone
    nothing but your shallow soul

    don't you dare to call me back
    'cause i'll never give an answer
    an answer tt even a friend wouldn't listen

    i was drowned on a black ocean
    anger
    ego
    fright
    sadness

    noone tried to save me nor i did
    better to be down there

    alone

    i even consider might be i should be dead
    i started to hate myself and in the end
    i begin to hate everything

    i don't care my suroundings
    i don't care even to my self

    when i walked through
    noone can sense me

    but should i die like THIS?
    No, i have more thing to do
    i won't die like this so fast

    Don't bother me

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    Re: Nerds

    Whats this got to do with nerds?

    Anywhoo, I like how you have expressed your emotions in this poem, I sense a lot of anger ^^;;

    Some lines didn't make sense but it was an okay sort of poem ^^

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: Nerds

    nice poem and i like how you explode in anger
    really intence and emotional
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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