Whats this got to do with nerds?
Anywhoo, I like how you have expressed your emotions in this poem, I sense a lot of anger ^^;;
Some lines didn't make sense but it was an okay sort of poem ^^
have you ever felt
a feeling of being separated
a feeling of being an evil
a feeling of being dead
the day when everything is gone
nothing but your shallow soul
don't you dare to call me back
'cause i'll never give an answer
an answer tt even a friend wouldn't listen
i was drowned on a black ocean
anger
ego
fright
sadness
noone tried to save me nor i did
better to be down there
alone
i even consider might be i should be dead
i started to hate myself and in the end
i begin to hate everything
i don't care my suroundings
i don't care even to my self
when i walked through
noone can sense me
but should i die like THIS?
No, i have more thing to do
i won't die like this so fast
Don't bother me
Whats this got to do with nerds?
Anywhoo, I like how you have expressed your emotions in this poem, I sense a lot of anger ^^;;
Some lines didn't make sense but it was an okay sort of poem ^^
TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
nice poem and i like how you explode in anger
really intence and emotional
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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