t.O.e

have you ever felt
a feeling of being separated
a feeling of being an evil
a feeling of being dead

the day when everything is gone
nothing but your shallow soul

don't you dare to call me back
'cause i'll never give an answer
an answer tt even a friend wouldn't listen

i was drowned on a black ocean
anger
ego
fright
sadness

noone tried to save me nor i did
better to be down there

alone

i even consider might be i should be dead
i started to hate myself and in the end
i begin to hate everything

i don't care my suroundings
i don't care even to my self

when i walked through
noone can sense me

but should i die like THIS?
No, i have more thing to do
i won't die like this so fast

Don't bother me

Hold.Me.X.Thrill.Me

Whats this got to do with nerds?

Anywhoo, I like how you have expressed your emotions in this poem, I sense a lot of anger ^^;;

Some lines didn't make sense but it was an okay sort of poem ^^

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TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

HolderOfTheDarkChalice

nice poem and i like how you explode in anger
really intence and emotional

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