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    Never to be

    My heart beats hard when I look at you.
    My lips get dry and I can't speak.
    I want to tell you but I hold it inside.
    Head spinning from thoughts of love,
    My heart thumping from excitment.

    My mind goes off to a wonderous place;
    Its above the stars, and beyond any galaxy ever seen.
    A paradise just me and you,
    The birds singing; the wind humming.
    The ocean so beatiful; the sky so blue.

    But right then I wake to realize your gone,
    Just me standing there and heart broken.
    Never my heart tells me...
    Never to be.

    Please comment this is one of my serious poems since 5 years I need to get back on track

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: Never to be

    wow...so serious. its like you're trying to tell someone you love how you feel about them but couldn't so you hold it back for a while but then that person is gone. i have experianced it before. good job! i love it. keep it up!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: Never to be

    Yay lol eh I'll try

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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