Never
Let yourself down and lose your dreams
Never
Leave yourself open
To allow pain grow in your heart.
Never
Drown your heart in saddness
But fill in yourself with bliss and pure hope
So every time you look at yourself you see a smile
"How to draw a dragon: 'Cautiously approach the dragon, offer it a piece of candy or a little sister, and draw while it happily munches away.'" J. Neodragon Peffer
Hm, yeah, I really did like this poem, though it could be a tad longer...but, besides that one little flaw, I really did enjoy reading this poem. My most favorite part was when you said:
"Never
Leave yourself open
To allow pain grow in your heart."
Seeing as I do that most of the time, it reflected on me alot. Anyways, good job.
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Dude..This is cool. I agree it could've been longer but you are new so we'll let you slide by.
Great first work ^^
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good poem but can be a little bit longer if you can agree wit me here dragon born. im not trying to be rude but you have to get to be longer. overall it was very good. keep up your hard work.
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Thank you three...I agree that it could be longer but I got writters block after I wroted the last stanza.
"How to draw a dragon: 'Cautiously approach the dragon, offer it a piece of candy or a little sister, and draw while it happily munches away.'" J. Neodragon Peffer
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