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    Never Alone

    I feel you in the morning
    When i first awake
    Your thought is with me
    With each decision I make.

    You'd been around forever
    Since the first breath I took
    Now i have to go on alone
    But for love, I need not look.

    Cause by what you bestowed
    In our short time together
    Will last in my heart
    Forever and ever

    Although you've left
    and now walk above
    I'm never alone
    I'm wrapped in your love.

    Enjoy now your long waited reward
    Feel peace that your love continues on
    What was taught to me will be taught to mine
    Cause you live on in me even after you've gone.

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    Re: Never Alone

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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    Re: Never Alone

    othello, i gotta say tht u r getting better all the time....tht poem is beautiful.....whirlwind love but true love has stayed in ur heart.....very nice....look forward to reading more my lovelie

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    Re: Never Alone

    that was freaking nice man, keep it up!

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    Re: Never Alone

    Quote Originally Posted by Othello
    I feel you in the morning
    When i first awake
    Your thought is with me
    With each decision I make.

    You'd been around forever
    Since the first breath I took
    Now i have to go on alone
    But for love, I need not look.

    Cause by what you bestowed
    In our short time together
    Will last in my heart
    Forever and ever

    Although you've left
    and now walk above
    I'm never alone
    I'm wrapped in your love.

    Enjoy now your long waited reward
    Feel peace that your love continues on
    What was taught to me will be taught to mine
    Cause you live on in me even after you've gone.

    <Comments please>
    yea! this is so far the best rhyming poem i've seen in AO.
    it has a real smooth flow without making the words overflow in that particular phrase....
    10/10 - it has both meaning and flow to it ^^

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    Re: Never Alone

    i like the poem alot it
    reminds me of how short life is
    and how love is forever this is really
    an awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Never Alone

    *pats on your back*

    that was really good, I hope I hear more just like this 1.

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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