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Old Jun 15, 2006, 07:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Never Alone

I feel you in the morning
When i first awake
Your thought is with me
With each decision I make.

You'd been around forever
Since the first breath I took
Now i have to go on alone
But for love, I need not look.

Cause by what you bestowed
In our short time together
Will last in my heart
Forever and ever

Although you've left
and now walk above
I'm never alone
I'm wrapped in your love.

Enjoy now your long waited reward
Feel peace that your love continues on
What was taught to me will be taught to mine
Cause you live on in me even after you've gone.

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Old Jun 15, 2006, 08:03 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Never Alone

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Old Jun 15, 2006, 08:09 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Never Alone

othello, i gotta say tht u r getting better all the time....tht poem is beautiful.....whirlwind love but true love has stayed in ur heart.....very nice....look forward to reading more my lovelie
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Old Jun 15, 2006, 08:10 AM   #4 (permalink)
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that was freaking nice man, keep it up!
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Old Jun 15, 2006, 11:42 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Never Alone

Quote:
Originally Posted by Othello
I feel you in the morning
When i first awake
Your thought is with me
With each decision I make.

You'd been around forever
Since the first breath I took
Now i have to go on alone
But for love, I need not look.

Cause by what you bestowed
In our short time together
Will last in my heart
Forever and ever

Although you've left
and now walk above
I'm never alone
I'm wrapped in your love.

Enjoy now your long waited reward
Feel peace that your love continues on
What was taught to me will be taught to mine
Cause you live on in me even after you've gone.

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yea! this is so far the best rhyming poem i've seen in AO.
it has a real smooth flow without making the words overflow in that particular phrase....
10/10 - it has both meaning and flow to it ^^
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Old Jun 16, 2006, 12:15 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Never Alone

i like the poem alot it
reminds me of how short life is
and how love is forever this is really
an awesome poem
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Old Jun 16, 2006, 01:47 AM   #7 (permalink)
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*pats on your back*

that was really good, I hope I hear more just like this 1.
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