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Jun 15, 2006, 07:23 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2006 Location: Between the reaches of ones heart, mind and soul...where only a small light lingers.
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 Credits: 770 | Never Alone I feel you in the morning When i first awake Your thought is with me With each decision I make. You'd been around forever Since the first breath I took Now i have to go on alone But for love, I need not look. Cause by what you bestowed In our short time together Will last in my heart Forever and ever Although you've left and now walk above I'm never alone I'm wrapped in your love. Enjoy now your long waited reward Feel peace that your love continues on What was taught to me will be taught to mine Cause you live on in me even after you've gone. <Comments please>
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Jun 15, 2006, 08:09 AM
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  AO's Demon Slayer  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one.
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Credits: 1,464 | Re: Never Alone othello, i gotta say tht u r getting better all the time....tht poem is beautiful.....whirlwind love but true love has stayed in ur heart.....very nice....look forward to reading more my lovelie
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Jun 15, 2006, 11:42 PM
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 Elie Jelly  Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement
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Credits: 2,151 | Re: Never Alone Quote:
 it has a real smooth flow without making the words overflow in that particular phrase.... 10/10 - it has both meaning and flow to it ^^ 
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Jun 16, 2006, 12:15 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 5,581 | Re: Never Alone i like the poem alot it reminds me of how short life is and how love is forever this is really an awesome poem
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Jun 16, 2006, 01:47 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends
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Credits: 458 | Re: Never Alone *pats on your back* that was really good, I hope I hear more just like this 1.
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