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    Never Alone

    Look at those tears
    pooling up in your eyes
    down they roll
    falling onto the floor
    Never alone
    that was the promise
    to never stand alone
    to always be together
    You've had a place
    always by my side
    you've been apart of me
    standing together
    Never alone
    yet the tears fall
    how I've hurt you
    yet I'm here
    Watch them drip
    falling like a leaf
    an outward cry
    yet I'm here
    You're never alone
    You waited for me
    and I came
    but I didn't meet your need
    Even though I was there

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    Re: Never Alone

    I liked your poem alot,Is almost like you are crying out to someone that is in need it is verry sad.

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    Re: Never Alone

    Wow this poem is like so sad well to me. It almost made me cry but thats the reason I loved it!!!! I hope to see more!
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    Re: Never Alone

    awwwwwwwwwwww! that is like so sweet and sad. I love it. I like the choice of words and some of the description you put in it. I love. Keep it up.

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    Re: Never Alone

    Wow i liked your poem its kinda sad tho i feel for you! lol

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