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    never ending dream

    [Plagiarised Poem]

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    Re: never ending dream

    hmmmm.. I thought it was ok.

    [QUOTE]im hunting throughthe night
    the slave to my dream
    an illustrated scene
    that end in a stream[QUOTE]

    The rhyme in this stanza was off. Also some of the rhymeing seemed forced.
    I liked the overall message and thought th poem could be better.
    But thats just me.

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    Re: never ending dream

    Don't know Princes... that stranza seems nice to me... Maybe it's just me...
    I like this poem very much, somehow it really atracts my attention... maybe because I'm a hopeless dreamer...
    This poem made me feel better. Nice work!!! Post more!!!

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    Re: never ending dream

    OH MY GOD!!!! I know those words it comes from a song...a song...what is it...what is it....Hmmmmm.......I can't remember....Cascada!!!!!! She sings it! But since its a poem its was great! I loved it cause it just reminds me of that song! And it has it's smooth and calm moments for some reason. I hope to see more of your work!
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    Re: never ending dream

    Those are the exact words to "A never ending dream" by Cascada. Not a bad song if you ask me.

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    Re: never ending dream

    well you see i find it easier to break down a bit of a song and turn them into a poem its quite easy because the words are already their but maybe i should just come up with my own poem what do you think

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    Re: never ending dream

    lol,all poems are supposed to be original!otherwise its technically not your poem... >_<.
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    Re: never ending dream

    Do not post Plagiarised material.
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