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May 31, 2007, 03:47 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows
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 Credits: 2,711 | never ending dream [Plagiarised Poem] Only post writings that you yourself have written. Last edited by Kasai; Jun 01, 2007 at 06:47 AM. |
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May 31, 2007, 03:54 PM
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  NalaMidnight  Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia
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Credits: 14,781 | Re: never ending dream hmmmm.. I thought it was ok. [quote]im hunting throughthe night the slave to my dream an illustrated scene that end in a stream[quote] The rhyme in this stanza was off. Also some of the rhymeing seemed forced. I liked the overall message and thought th poem could be better. But thats just me. |
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May 31, 2007, 04:00 PM
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 Angelic  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: never ending dream Don't know Princes... that stranza seems nice to me...  Maybe it's just me...I like this poem very much, somehow it really atracts my attention... maybe because I'm a hopeless dreamer... This poem made me feel better. Nice work!!! Post more!!! |
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May 31, 2007, 04:19 PM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: never ending dream OH MY GOD!!!! I know those words it comes from a song...a song...what is it...what is it....Hmmmmm.......I can't remember....Cascada!!!!!! She sings it! But since its a poem its was great! I loved it cause it just reminds me of that song! And it has it's smooth and calm moments for some reason. I hope to see more of your work! 
__________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ ♡♥Anime Life♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do  |
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May 31, 2007, 05:53 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows
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Credits: 2,711 | Re: never ending dream well you see i find it easier to break down a bit of a song and turn them into a poem its quite easy because the words are already their but maybe i should just come up with my own poem what do you think |
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May 31, 2007, 07:28 PM
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 Newbie  Join Date: May 2007 Location: Inbetween Heaven & Hell
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Credits: 310 | Re: never ending dream lol,all poems are supposed to be original!otherwise its technically not your poem... >_<.
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