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    Never forget you

    This is my first poem tread. I wasn't really into poems untill my friend and school introduced it to me. but this is to my friend name Zero



    People see you as a cat,
    But I see you as a friend,
    From the first day I touch
    Your dark gray and white fur.
    I knew you was the one

    Born outside,
    But live in my home,
    A funny, young tomcat,
    Everyday a new experience.

    Troublesome at times,
    But I know you were always sorry,
    Cause everyday when you come to home,
    You leave a flower at the doorway.

    Years grow up and so do you,
    And when you become lazy,
    And sick,
    I started to realized your end was near.

    Sneezing, coughing, and long hours
    Of sleep,
    Never really ate cause it will,
    Never rest in your stomach.

    Mostly 10 years old, and
    Is staring to suffer.
    I can’t bear to see you in pain.
    So I did the wisest thing possible.

    A friend told me,
    He will in a better place now,
    Where his soul is free,
    Happy with a buffet of fish and milk.

    Fair well my beloved friend,
    NOT pet. Friend.
    I will never forget you
    Ever!
    I now and will always believe you are the one.


    (2000-2010)

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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    Re: Never forget you

    it is a great poem, i tells of the life, death, and yet happyness. it is good.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: Never forget you

    thank you thank you. i know it isn't good though but i like it myself too.

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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    Very beautiful poem, you done a great job, keep it up...
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    Thank you. i tryed my best.......................

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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    i love it you are a great poet, you should put another one on.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    well i only made one poem and that is the one. but im pretty sure i'll end up making more.

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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    Re: Never forget you

    -bows- I enjoyed it Sai-kun. It shows that you were close to your Cat. I am the same way with mines. If he was gone, I do not know what I'd do. -bows again- I really enjoyed your poem Sai-kun.

    Living life on your own..Isn't always that easy..-Vincent

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