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I've never really loved anyone truely
Always half heartedly
I've never loved fully
Keeping grounded to myself
It's always been me alone
My heart is bruised but still mine
I wonder if keeping it will kill me
I've always just turned away
Oh how it breaks my heart
I want to tell you I love you
but how do I do that
How do I give myself wholey
great poem..............(ps, if u find out, tell me)
the poem lacked some thing, perhaps spelling and correct punctuation? the use of "ly" completely ruined the flow of the poem. When I took a first look, I thought "yes! A short poem". You've disappointed me. There is room for improvement. The simplicity of the words is what kept my attention.