Never have I.

Never have I sat outside your home.
Waited for you to come and go.
Never searched to find out where you dwell.
When those so close can't wait to tell.

Never aired your dirt to perfect strangers.
Never sat idly, with you in danger.
Only allowed others to take action.
You've always had the wrong reactions.

Never have I lost my spine.
Still taking life a day at a time.
But I always knew when I was in pain.
That one day a rainbow would follow rain.

I was alone each day I cried.
No one to wipe my tears... they dried.
You played in the sun, ignored my cry...
Will it be my turn? Because never have I!!!!

that is a very excellent piece of work. i like how it flows and how you portray your feelings throughout the entire poem. great job i hope to see more from you.

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Originally Posted by hyuuga13

that is a very excellent piece of work. i like how it flows and how you portray your feelings throughout the entire poem. great job i hope to see more from you.

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Thank you, I appreciate the feedback. And, I really like the words of your signature,

sheesh,...another excellent poem by peachy... :/ good work.. it's nicely done...

*sighs* ^^ i guess i understand what u meant there..sheesh... :/

Thank you, its good to know some one understands. And I read all you work too Rayme, so hurry and post some more so I can comment!

@_@ sheesh..... :p. <<< Thats my impression of you. :D

Yup.. ^^ they who we care for think we dont...and make wrong acusation and assumptions :/ and when they are happy..and we are sad...or in trouble..they..ignored us.. hehe ^^ i know how that feel in the end... been there *sighs* still am i guess.. *laughs* ^^ oh well.. :)

Glad to know u are eager to read more of mine ^^ and i think that is how i look like.. XD

Excellent work, Peach. I like how you convey ur feelings wit such fluidity, hope ta c more.:cool3:

Very, very nice!!!!
You definitely have some great talent there!!!!!