Never Be With Her!

When life comes at you
to fast everything seems
pefect,then you realise
what it is and it's just
dream.

Nothing can really slow
you down when you're
blinded by the happiness
it brings,but it never really
bothers me at all.

Just like kids on a winter's
day going down hill on a sleigh
in play,my life is just a blurry after
thought everything is just glance of
what i really want.

Time is precious and never ending
just like love when you find the one
you wan't,my hand in her's that
perfect hug ,everything i need
and love is just a memory or is it
a reality?

My confession is the best, now
that i lay here in my rest ,thoughts
of her will never be guessed as i
will have her in my heart always.

Life was simple with no cares for
me ,then she came in and showed
me the thing's that made careing
feel the best,i never will loose that
much.

As she walks down that aile dressed
in white and while everyone smiles,
i will be there watching from from the back
pew happy i know love works in awesome
ways but as she said i do to him my thoughts
get choked up in my throat as i just say good bye
with smile and be there for here as a friend.

Then i wake up tear's on ym cheek as i know
the reality is real and not a dream i wait
for her as she comes in never telling her
dont be with him ,because she is so happy
and thats all that really matters.

So as i close with this thought just know
i am not sad nor upset,because she means
the world to me and what he does for her
to make her happy will always make me smile.

this poem is just something i needed to get off
my chest really and hope everyone likes it, any comments
or tips would be aprecaited . and the poem is about how
love affects people in a way that really can't be discribed
but i hope i did well enough so people would understand.

:cry: Thats Sad, not Drama!

>.<ll Very depressing dude~

If your going for that, its a Ok Poem~

WOW bro you were right
i love this poem
~crys~ i feel its true

Very nice poem. It was sweet and kinda sad. It also showed how some people feel when they love someone so much that once they lose them eventhough it hurts they'll always hold a special place in their hearts. Great job and I look forward to reading more.

That was beautiful *tear* Wow I really loved that Chris. Not sure what else to say... Just very nice job and please keep writing.

wow, sometimes you read a poem and empathise with it completly, havn't found anyone with whom i feel that way myself, but i can imagine how it would feel after reading your poem.