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    Never Be With Her!

    When life comes at you
    to fast everything seems
    pefect,then you realise
    what it is and it's just
    dream.

    Nothing can really slow
    you down when you're
    blinded by the happiness
    it brings,but it never really
    bothers me at all.

    Just like kids on a winter's
    day going down hill on a sleigh
    in play,my life is just a blurry after
    thought everything is just glance of
    what i really want.

    Time is precious and never ending
    just like love when you find the one
    you wan't,my hand in her's that
    perfect hug ,everything i need
    and love is just a memory or is it
    a reality?

    My confession is the best, now
    that i lay here in my rest ,thoughts
    of her will never be guessed as i
    will have her in my heart always.

    Life was simple with no cares for
    me ,then she came in and showed
    me the thing's that made careing
    feel the best,i never will loose that
    much.

    As she walks down that aile dressed
    in white and while everyone smiles,
    i will be there watching from from the back
    pew happy i know love works in awesome
    ways but as she said i do to him my thoughts
    get choked up in my throat as i just say good bye
    with smile and be there for here as a friend.

    Then i wake up tear's on ym cheek as i know
    the reality is real and not a dream i wait
    for her as she comes in never telling her
    dont be with him ,because she is so happy
    and thats all that really matters.

    So as i close with this thought just know
    i am not sad nor upset,because she means
    the world to me and what he does for her
    to make her happy will always make me smile.

    this poem is just something i needed to get off
    my chest really and hope everyone likes it, any comments
    or tips would be aprecaited . and the poem is about how
    love affects people in a way that really can't be discribed
    but i hope i did well enough so people would understand.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Never Be With Her!

    Thats Sad, not Drama!

    >.<ll Very depressing dude~

    If your going for that, its a Ok Poem~
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    Re: Never Be With Her!

    WOW bro you were right
    i love this poem
    ~crys~ i feel its true

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    Re: Never Be With Her!

    Very nice poem. It was sweet and kinda sad. It also showed how some people feel when they love someone so much that once they lose them eventhough it hurts they'll always hold a special place in their hearts. Great job and I look forward to reading more.
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    That was beautiful *tear* Wow I really loved that Chris. Not sure what else to say... Just very nice job and please keep writing.
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    Re: Never Be With Her!

    wow, sometimes you read a poem and empathise with it completly, havn't found anyone with whom i feel that way myself, but i can imagine how it would feel after reading your poem.
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