![]() |
| Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community! | Anime Online Rulez! |
| |||||||
![]() |
| | LinkBack | Thread Tools | Display Modes |
| | #1 (permalink) |
| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
Posts: 2,839
Thanks: 34
Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts
![]() ![]() Credits: 5,581 | Never Be With Her! When life comes at you to fast everything seems pefect,then you realise what it is and it's just dream. Nothing can really slow you down when you're blinded by the happiness it brings,but it never really bothers me at all. Just like kids on a winter's day going down hill on a sleigh in play,my life is just a blurry after thought everything is just glance of what i really want. Time is precious and never ending just like love when you find the one you wan't,my hand in her's that perfect hug ,everything i need and love is just a memory or is it a reality? My confession is the best, now that i lay here in my rest ,thoughts of her will never be guessed as i will have her in my heart always. Life was simple with no cares for me ,then she came in and showed me the thing's that made careing feel the best,i never will loose that much. As she walks down that aile dressed in white and while everyone smiles, i will be there watching from from the back pew happy i know love works in awesome ways but as she said i do to him my thoughts get choked up in my throat as i just say good bye with smile and be there for here as a friend. Then i wake up tear's on ym cheek as i know the reality is real and not a dream i wait for her as she comes in never telling her dont be with him ,because she is so happy and thats all that really matters. So as i close with this thought just know i am not sad nor upset,because she means the world to me and what he does for her to make her happy will always make me smile. this poem is just something i needed to get off my chest really and hope everyone likes it, any comments or tips would be aprecaited . and the poem is about how love affects people in a way that really can't be discribed but i hope i did well enough so people would understand.
__________________ |
| Status: Offline
| |
| | #4 (permalink) |
Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
Posts: 578
Thanks: 1
Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts
![]() ![]() Credits: 2,616 | Re: Never Be With Her! Very nice poem. It was sweet and kinda sad. It also showed how some people feel when they love someone so much that once they lose them eventhough it hurts they'll always hold a special place in their hearts. Great job and I look forward to reading more.
__________________ Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it! |
| Status: Offline
| |
| | #5 (permalink) |
Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart
Posts: 307
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
![]() ![]() Credits: 364 | Re: Never Be With Her! That was beautiful *tear* Wow I really loved that Chris. Not sure what else to say... Just very nice job and please keep writing.
__________________ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums |
| Status: Offline
| |
| | #6 (permalink) |
Newbie | Re: Never Be With Her! wow, sometimes you read a poem and empathise with it completly, havn't found anyone with whom i feel that way myself, but i can imagine how it would feel after reading your poem.
__________________ The maximum size for an image in your signature is 450x110 pixels, please resize your image. i keep on thinking it's not good bye, i keep on thinking it's our time to fly FRIENDS FOREVER!! |
| Status: Offline
| |