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    Never Understood

    Never Understood

    You never knew what it was like. You just thought you knew. The truth is, you never understood.

    I once hoped. I had hoped there was a chance we'd be close
    But then again I never knew you
    While I could predict your actions, your words
    I just never knew your heart

    I believed. I believed that you would be what I'd longed for
    But wasn't I, a slumbering fool
    Guileless and trusting, to all
    Never knew your thoughts

    I had hoped, that it'll be, better than before
    But it just won't work, has never worked, and never ever more
    While it hurts, and while it stings, while I hope some more
    Just want to know, I just want to feel what it feels
    What it feels like...To be a friend

    I had thought, that it would different from them all
    I thought perhaps, we both, had a chance
    Perhaps I was just asking for too much
    That I was asking for much more... Too much

    I was just hoping. Asking too much. I'm sorry.


    18/08/07

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    What started out as my interpretation of a song turned out to become a poem, that kinda reflected what I was going through at that time. Which was barely two weeks ago, time flies so quickly...

    Figured that I might as well kick myself out of inactiveness by joining the POTM, since I have been eyeing it for a while...

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    Re: Never Understood

    I really like this, but perhaps that is because I relate quite strongly to the feeling it gives.
    Confusion, Pain, Misguided hopes, having to look at ones self and realize you had been the fool.
    Yep, I know the feeling all too well.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Never Understood

    i love the poem good work alot of emotions shown through out the poem
    very good ^^ keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Never Understood

    Thank you! I was thinking that no one would even bother to read my poem...

    Peach_follows : The part and parcel of life... Learning to deal with foolish mistakes and letting go of what we once had...

    iluvmyloser : Thank you The poems that come straight from the heart are probably the best that I ever do.

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    Re: Never Understood

    I don't wanna psuedo-mod or anything, but read the rules every month!!!!!

    This poem won't qualify if you're keeping it the same.


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