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Dec 13, 2007, 01:53 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in ol'Michigan
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 Credits: 10,886 | This New Feeling Feathers falling as my heart is calling Crystal blue with red tints and hues The feathers flowing around my world The happiness rolling in ever so new The brushing bristles of the feather thistles These new found shapes in my eyes The feelings of warmth around my core The divine light falling through the clouds in the skies The shivering night and it's cold fright The sight of the virgin moon The shouting and the screaming, excited The new energy swirling to sooth, Ready to plume.
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Dec 13, 2007, 02:02 PM
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 CHUCK NORRIS!!!  Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN
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Credits: 110,749 | Re: This New Feeling I like how descriptive this poem is. In fact, I think that this was beautifully written. I'm impressed. Quote:
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