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    This New Feeling

    Feathers falling as my heart is calling
    Crystal blue with red tints and hues
    The feathers flowing around my world
    The happiness rolling in ever so new

    The brushing bristles of the feather thistles
    These new found shapes in my eyes
    The feelings of warmth around my core
    The divine light falling through the clouds in the skies

    The shivering night and it's cold fright
    The sight of the virgin moon
    The shouting and the screaming, excited
    The new energy swirling to sooth,
    Ready to plume.

    "Walk in with Reason, and leave with Passion."

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    Re: This New Feeling

    I like how descriptive this poem is. In fact, I think that this was beautifully written. I'm impressed.

    The brushing bristles of the feather thistles
    These new found shapes in my eyes
    The feelings of warmth around my core
    The divine light falling through the clouds in the skies
    That, my friend, is true happiness. ^_^ Kudos!


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