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Old Dec 13, 2007, 01:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This New Feeling

Feathers falling as my heart is calling
Crystal blue with red tints and hues
The feathers flowing around my world
The happiness rolling in ever so new

The brushing bristles of the feather thistles
These new found shapes in my eyes
The feelings of warmth around my core
The divine light falling through the clouds in the skies

The shivering night and it's cold fright
The sight of the virgin moon
The shouting and the screaming, excited
The new energy swirling to sooth,
Ready to plume.
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Old Dec 13, 2007, 02:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: This New Feeling

I like how descriptive this poem is. In fact, I think that this was beautifully written. I'm impressed.

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The brushing bristles of the feather thistles
These new found shapes in my eyes
The feelings of warmth around my core
The divine light falling through the clouds in the skies
That, my friend, is true happiness. ^_^ Kudos!
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